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This is a discussion on Bojh within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Hum chale the qafla lekar kitne khab palko-n tale kuchh ummidein kuchh jazbe wafa ke sath kitni hi arzooein thin ...
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11-10-2006, 05:02 AM
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Hum chale the qafla lekar kitne khab palko-n tale kuchh ummidein kuchh jazbe wafa ke sath kitni hi arzooein thin itna saman-e safar phir bhi kaisi subaksari thi apne halke phulke wajud ko lekar chalte kahan the udte phirte the is qafle ko raah main lutna tha tumhein raasta badalna tha aaj main is muqam per tanha koi saman-e safar nahin na koi khab na tamanna na aarzoo na hi ummid koi na justaju konsa jazaba kaisi wafa kuchh nahin kuchh bhi to nahin koi saman-e safar nahin PHIR BHI BOJH HAI KITNA!         |
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#2
11-10-2006, 06:08 AM
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aaj main is muqam per tanha koi saman-e safar nahin na koi khab na tamanna na aarzoo na hi ummid koi na justaju buhat khoub g ...... buhat achi kavish ........ likhti rahiye .... |
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#3
11-10-2006, 06:42 AM
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bai wah... bohat khoob nazm kahi hy... ye nazm bhi apny khyaal aur andaaz k lehaz se bohat aala hy... aik bat kahuN ga, k ap achi nazm likh leti haiN, alfaaz ko bhi achy andaaz maiN istamal kr leti haiN... aur wo jo nazm ka aik canvas set krna hota hy, wo bhi ap khoob kr leti haiN... mujhy jo kami is waqt nazr aa rahi hy ap ki nazmoN maiN wo sirf aur sirf wazn ki hy.... so mera mashwara ye hy k ap wazn ki taraf sanjeedgi se tawaju deN... ta-k ye bunyadi kami bhi dur ho saky... aik bar phir meri janib se dheroN daad is achi nazm ki nazr.. Allah Mola ap ko khush rakhy aur bohat ziada ata kary....
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 11-10-2006 at 06:48 AM. |
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#4
11-10-2006, 06:54 AM
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Aik aur achchhi si aue bahut hi touching si nazm per hamari janib se bhi daad hazir hai.........Noor! Is bojh per ittefaq se aik sher bhi yaad aa gaya: Bojh hota jo ghamo ka to utha bhi lete Zindgi bojh bani hai to uthaayen kaisey
__________________  Zafar |
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#5
11-10-2006, 03:14 PM
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Assalam-o-alaikum Muhtarma Aik adad umdah nazam kahi hay app ne Hamesha ki tarah khobsurat khayalat ko lafzon main buna hay Acha laga app ka likha pah kar Isi tarah se likhti rahiay k likhne se hi nikhar ata hay Hamari janib se buhat si daad qabool kijiay Khush Rahiay 
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#7
11-11-2006, 06:32 AM
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Assalam alaikum, Bahut badya, shukriya, Iqbal Sheikh,Wardha. |
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#8
11-11-2006, 08:10 PM
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 wahhh...bohat khubsoorat nazam hai....lutf aaya parh kar...khayalat yaqeenan qabil-e-sataish haiN... khush rahiye
__________________  . . . Mere dil.. Mere musaafir..! |
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#9
11-15-2006, 10:28 PM
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salam!!!! bohat khoob.....Nice one(*)(*)
__________________ Zinda Hon Main Iss Tarah Say Ke Zindagi Nahi.. Jalta Hoa Diya Hon Magar Roshanii Nahiii... |
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