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This is a discussion on Bahaar Na Huai Khazan Ho Gayee(aakaash) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Bahar Na Huai Khazaan Ho Gayee Har Aafat Gham E Jaan Ho Gayee Jis Ki Sazaa Tanhayee Thi Yaron Hum ...
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#1
08-23-2007, 10:23 PM
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Bahar Na Huai Khazaan Ho Gayee Har Aafat Gham E Jaan Ho Gayee Jis Ki Sazaa Tanhayee Thi Yaron Hum Say Aesi Ek Khata Ho Gayee Tujeh Bin Yeh Dil Na Laga Kahein Tujeh Bin Sunni Har Raha Ho Gayee Roshni Mitt Gayee Yahan Aab Tuo Tanhayee Dukh Ka Karwaan Ho Gayee Enhee Paheltay Huay Anheron Mein Zindagi Apni Ek Sazaa Ho Gayee Mohabat Kay Es Sheir Mein Aaj Nafrat Bhi Deikho Khuda Ho Gayee Ghamon Kay Es Mausam Mein Har Ek Khushi Bewafa Ho Gayee Bahar Ka Sama Bhi Laut Gaya Aab Tuo Udassi Say Bhari Har Disha Ho Gayee Raat Yeahi Mani Soochtay Huay Dhali Kyon Mujeh Say Meri Zindagi Juda Ho Gayee --------------
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#2
08-24-2007, 12:19 PM
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aakash mery khayal main ye aapki apni poetry hai, aap ne ghalat section main post kar diya hai. hamary pass poetry k liye alag section hai (poet club) jahan aap apni poetry share kar sakty hain is liye aapki thread main poet club main move kar rahi hon khush rahain 
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08-24-2007, 06:15 PM
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HG POET CLUB main khush aamded aakaash aap ki ghazal pari,achhi lagi,lekin abhi bahot mehnat ki zaroorat hai,main aap ko aek link de raha hoon,ussey baghor pariye ga,yaqeenan bahot kuchh seekhaney ko miley ga, 1.gif ")1") link yeh raha..... [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] mashq-e-sukhan aor mehnat jaari rakhiye,INSHA ALLAH bahot behtari aaye gi kalaam main, bahot khush rahiye,
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08-24-2007, 07:54 PM
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bhut khub................ ....... |
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#5
08-24-2007, 10:29 PM
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 achi kawish ahi... mashq jari rakhiye.. aik bat kehna chahooNgi k apne ghazal maiN qafiye par tawajja nahiN di.. jaisa k matla maiN aapne "khizaaN aur jaN" ko qafiye k taur par istemal kia hai...to ab apki ghazal k qawafi inke hi hum sooti alfaz honay chahiyeN thay.. wazan par bhi tawajja dijiye.. khush rahiye
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08-25-2007, 04:42 AM
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achi kawash hi magar wazan ki kami hi
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