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This is a discussion on azad nazam.......... hamein tum say mohabat hai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts Zeeshan bhai! bohat khoob nazm kahi hy ap ne... khyalaat ka baha'o acha hy, lekin alfaaz ...
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05-30-2007, 11:17 AM
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thankxxxxxxxxx faizan pai k ap ko nazam pasand aii actully mein nay ridhm k bager likhnay ki koshish ki thi nasar ki soorat mein pata nahin kamyab howa k nahin kher me behtari ki koshish karoon ga sada khush rahein "HG PuNj@bI@Nzz"<!-- google_ad_section_en d -->
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#12
05-30-2007, 11:19 AM
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thankxxxxxxxxx safeena jiii ap ko meri nazam pasand aii ap nay sahi kaha k sabhi k sath ye masla hota hai aur me k sath b kher ap ka shukerya sada khush rahein "HG PuNj@bI@Nzz"<!-- google_ad_section_en d -->
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#13
05-30-2007, 11:22 AM
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thankxxxxxxx shazlay jiii ap ko merinazam pasand aii sada khush rahein "HG PuNj@bI@Nzz"<!-- google_ad_section_en d -->
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#14
05-30-2007, 11:29 AM
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be-shak wo aazad nazm ho ya simply nasri-nazm.... dono k liay kuch usool hoty haiN... ager aap ne rhythm k baghair likhna chaha tha to ap isy aazad nazm na kehty.... 
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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#15
05-30-2007, 11:35 AM
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oh thats mistake thankxxxx faizan bhai tu mein kya likhta is ko plz duss dein sada khush rahein "HG PuNj@bI@Nzz"
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#16
05-30-2007, 11:46 AM
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poetry to hy hi rhythm ka naam.... nasr aur nazm meiN yahi to faraq hy k nasr meiN jo khyaal aaya usy as it is likh diya... lekin poetry meiN kuch parameters haiN, jin ko follow kreN gy to hi alfaaz ka majmoa nazm kehla'ay ga... aazad nazm maiN wazn ko follow kiya jata hy... kuch behreN aisi haiN jin meiN aik hi trha k arkaan bar bar aaty haiN, un behroN meiN aazad nazm kahi ja sakti hy... lehaza aazad nazm kehny k liay aap ko behroN se aur un k auzaan se waqifiat zuroori hy... aur nasri nazm meiN sirf alfaaz k sauti bahao ko follow kiya jata hy.... (jo k aik bohat mushaqat talab kaam hy...) durust nasri nazm likhna abhi her kisi k bas ka kam nhi hy, is k liay aap ko alfaaz ka durust talafuz, adaigi, aur us k sauti pehuoN ko dekhna dekhna hota hy... agerchy abhi adbi halqoN meiN "nasri nazm" aik mutanazia topic hy, lekin bohat se baRy shoara ne isy apny jazbat k izhar k liay istamal kiya hy.... ab aap khud hi decide kr leN k aap ne kis medium meiN nazm kahi hy.....
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 05-30-2007 at 11:50 AM. Reason: some words were missing |
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05-30-2007, 12:03 PM
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thankxxxxxxxx faizan bhai abhi muje sub samj mein gya next time mein in batoon ko mad e nazar rakhon ga aur inshallah i know k meri poetry mein ni8khar aye ga sada khush rahein "HG PuNj@bI@Nzz"
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#18
05-30-2007, 12:21 PM
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ji zuroor, Allah ne chaha to aany waly dinoN meiN aap ki poetry meiN bohat nikhaar paida ho ga... bas musalsal mashq zururi hy... Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada aata kary, khush raheN, aabad rhaN....
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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05-30-2007, 02:58 PM
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thankxxxxxxxx faizan bhai ap ki islah boht help kerti hai muje hamesha sada khush rahein ..................
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#20
05-30-2007, 06:57 PM
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Kia Baat Hay Janab Bohatttttttttt Khoob,bohat Achi Lagi Aapki Nazam  ....khush Rahiye....  |
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