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Ashk Ruke tow sahra ho ga

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Old 11-01-2007, 07:06 AM
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Sathiyo

Aek aur Kawish aap sab ki nazar. Ara'a ka intezar rahey ga



1. Ashk ruke tow sahra ho ga
beh nikle tow deryaa ho ga

2. Jab bhi chaand ko dekha ho ga
Us ney mujh ko socha ho ga

3. Raah badal li us ney apni
Raah mein mujh ko dekha ho ga

4. dekhna tujh ko, milna tera
Khawab kahan ye poora ho ga

5. Kon yahaN aata hey pagley
dekh le mur ke saaya ho ga

6. Laila baal bakherey nikli
MajnooN ban mein roya ho ga

7. Umr bita ke hijr ke ban meiN
Wasl ka bas ik lamha ho ga

8. Tujh sey bicher ker dil ka panchi
daali daali roya ho ga

9. Sham-e talab sey subh-e fana tak
Dil ka safar bas itna ho ga

10. Dushman jis ko maar na paaey
Us ko yar ney maara ho ga

11. Thora jhoot mila len is mein
sach tow bohat hi kerwa ho ga

12. La hasil hey shikwa phir bhi
Dil ka bojh tow halka ho ga

13. Tukrey dil ke chun lo khud hi
wo tow jag meiN uljha ho ga

14. kaisey kahun wo mera naheen hey
aur bhala wo kis ka ho ga


Qamar Zaman
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Old 11-01-2007, 08:02 AM
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Default Re: Ashk Ruke tow sahra ho ga

dekhna tujh ko, milna tera
Khawab kahan ye poora ho ga

Tujh sey bicher ker dil ka panchi
daali daali roya ho ga


wah Qamar Zaman Sahab, achi ghazal kahi ap ne, rawaN mager choti behr ki is ghazal k sabhi ashar pasand aa'ay, mager oper likhy do shair to bohat hi khoob haiN... itny kam gunja'ish meiN mazmoon ko smaitna khasa kaThin kam hota hy, mager ap ne achy andaaz meiN nibhayaa...

isi trha likhty aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola ap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy....

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Old 11-01-2007, 11:09 AM
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kaisey kahun wo mera naheen hey
aur bhala wo kis ka ho ga....
wahhh...bohat khoob tamaam shair he shandaar hain lakin
ye shair bohat acha laga dad qabol kijiye ga
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Old 11-01-2007, 05:27 PM
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Ashk ruke to sehra hoga
Beh nikle to darya hoga

Matla hi ghazab ka kaha hai...mashaAllah...a ur uske baad poori ghazal hi ghazab dha rahi hai....khaas kar ke ye ash'aar

Tujh se bichaR kar dil ka panchi
Dali dali roya hoga

Shaam-e-talab se subh-e-fana tak
Dil ka safar bas itna hoga

TukRe dil ke chun lo khud hi
Wo to jag maiN uljha hoga

Bhai ye ghazal bhi "Bik chuke saare raazdaaN kab ke" ki tarah shandar hai...aap mashaAllah bohot achche shaire haiN...keep it up
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Old 11-02-2007, 05:05 AM
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Mohtaram Qamar saheb,
Aap ki ghazal buhat pasand aayee choti behr aur saada alfaaz mein likhay gayay ashaar daikh kar lagta tu yehi hai keh aisa likhna buhat aasan hai magar jannay waalay jaantay hain keh yeh raah aasan nahin. Buhat saari daad hazir hai.

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Faizan Saheb:

Ghazal ki pazeeraai ka shukria. Aaj kal jaaney kyun choti behr sawar hey khasey arsey sey. Aap ka likha sahi hey ke kafi mushkil hota hey is behr mein mazmoon ko sametna. Isi waja sey kuch achey khayalat reh bhi jaatey hein, naheen aatey choti behr ke ehatey mein.

dad ka bey had shukria

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bohut khubsurat ghazal kahi , mubarakbaad qabool kijye, shukriya
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ashk ruke to sahra hoga

bah nikle to darya hoga

is chhoti bahar ki khoobsoorat ghazal ke sabhi ashar kamalke hain.aap ki yeh ghazal behad pasand aai.buhat sari daad ki mustahiq hai yeh ghazal.
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Default Re: Ashk Ruke tow sahra ho ga

Kanwal Saheba:

Is ghazal mein mujhey bhi ye sher bey had pasand hey. Dad ke liye shukria

Kher andesh
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