Urdu Poetry Forum

**Zealous** · #11 07-22-2006, 01:40 PM

Sajid raheem sahab poet club mein khush amdeed @};-
aur apki ghazal bhi parh k bohat lutf aya,
daad qabool kijiay @}:-

**kanch ki mehroo** · #12 07-22-2006, 07:19 PM

wahhhh ...kia kehnay bhai ji...bohat hi haseen ghazal kahi aapne...bohat hi achay @};-

khush rahye

**Ashraf Naqvi** · #13 07-23-2006, 08:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sajidraheem

My New Poem

Apnay ash'aar se phir dardd jagaa lainay do
Aah mai'n phir wo asar lot k aa lainay do

Meri dunyaa bhi to ghaafil thi mujh se aaj talak
Abb k mujh ko meri dunyaa ko bhulaa lainay do

zindagi bharr to kaee log nibhaayaa hai'n karai'n
Hum pe ik baar zaraa mo'ut ko aa lainay do

Saans ki dorr ki kyaa baat kiyaa kertay ho
Hum ko dhaagaa koee mazboot banaa lainay do

Dardd sehnaa bhi to aasaa'n thaa, sahaa kertay thay
Sho'uq se apnaa lahoo aaj bahaa lainay do

Darr pe un ke kharay kharay he phirr se shaam hui
Un ko ik baar to chokhatt pe tum aa lainay do

Abrr, aankho'n mai'n hai, barsaat bhi aa jaay gi
Un k honto'n pe mera naam to aa lainay do

Ab to bay-zaar si dunyaa ye nazar aati hai
Apnay ash'aar bhi Sajid ko sunaa lainay do

Written By: Sajid Raheem Sheikh
(sajidraheem@hotmail .com)

Bohat khoob Sheikh jee..... aap to bohat achhi nazm kehtay haiN! Khush rehiyay likhtay rehiyay.

**m4mani** · #14 07-23-2006, 08:55 PM

Abrr, aankho'n mai'n hai, barsaat bhi aa jaay gi
Un k honto'n pe mera naam to aa lainay do

wah..........bohat khoob............boh at hi acha shair kaha bhia aap nay................. keep sharing