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~*~Alfaaz kabhi tasveer banaya kartai thai~*~

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Old 02-11-2006, 10:09 PM
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salaam dostoo

aaj aik nai nazam aap sab kai sath share kar rahi hoon umeed hai pasand ai gi

~*~Alfaaz kabhi tasveer banaya kartai thai~*~


Alfaaz kabhi tasveer banaya kartai thai
Tumhein khayaloon mein saja kar
Khawaboon ko tabeer banaya kartai thai
Kabhi rang bhartai thai un mein chahat ka
Kabhi umangoon ko mehkaya kartai thai
Kabhi yadoon ko samo kar dil mein ye
Ashkoon ko bahaya kartai thai
Kabhi pehroon bethai tumhein sochtai to
Khud sai bhi sharmaya kartai thai
Kabhi intezar ki dehleez par tehrai ye
Khadshoon sai ghabraya kartai thai
Tum mohabbat kartai ho sirf mujhse
Ye keh kar mujhe behlaya kartai thai
Alfaaz kabhi tasveer banaya kartai thai
Tumhari rahoon mein sehmai sai
Tumhein bulaya kartai thai
Tumhein chupa kar ankhoon mein
Tumhein tumse churaya kartai thai
Kabhi simti hui yadoon mein liptai ye
Tumhari batoon ko dohraya kartai thai
Kabhi mohabbat ki anch to kabhi kurbat mein
Khud ko jalaya kartai thai
Har pal har lamha sang mere
Ye tumhein pukara kartai thai
Hatheli par likh kar naam sada
panai ki dua ye kartai thai
Alfaaz kabhi tasveer banaya kartai thai
Khawaboon ko tabeer banaya kartai thai
Kabhi khonai kabhi panai ki justuju mein
Khud sai ye haara kartai thai
Kabhi sapnoon ko ye buntai thai
Kabhi thak kar choor ho jaya kartai thai
Kabhi tasawur mein tumse ye
Iqraar-e-mohabbat kartai thai
Koi lamha aisa beeta na
Jab tumhein ye yaad na kartai thai
Ye doob kar tum mein aksar hi
Khud ko bhi bhulaya kartai thai
Kuch gumsum sai kuch khamosh sai ye
Khud sai nazrain bhi churaya kartai thai
Tumhein yadoon mein saja kar aksar ye
pehroon tumhein socha kartai thai
Ye aaj bhi wohi kartai hain
Jo pehlai kiya kartai thai
Ye aaj bhi sang hamarai chaltai hain
Wohi shamain hain wohi raatain hain
Jin mein khawab ye buntai hain
Ye aaj bhi tumhara naam liyai
Mujhse shararat kartai hain
Meri khamosh si in ankhoon mein
Ye deep jalai rakhtai hain
Hain aaj bhi mausam waisai hi
Jaisai pehlai hua kartai thai
Hain aaj bhi jazbai waisai hi
Jaisai pehlai hua kartai thai
Aaj bhi lafzoon sai hai tasveer saji
Jaisai pehlai sajaya kartai thai
Alfaaz kabhi tasveer banaya kartai thai
Khawaboon ko tabeer banaya kartai thai



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buhat khub likh dala sister ji or is shair ki to kia hi bat hain

Meri khamosh si in ankhoon mein
Ye deep jalai rakhtai hain

bota khush raho
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Old 02-12-2006, 03:32 AM
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diyaji

bahut hi aacha laga...

lekin nazam to aur bhi aacha lagta agar aap inn sab alfaaz ka meaning bataade to

tabeer
Khadshoon
kurbat
justju

urdu main utna nahin jaanta shayad sab ko patha hai unka meaning par mere liye to yeh ajnabee hai
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Old 02-12-2006, 12:00 PM
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buhat khub likh dala sister ji or is shair ki to kia hi bat hain

Meri khamosh si in ankhoon mein
Ye deep jalai rakhtai hain

bota khush raho

is khuloos bhari tareef ka bauhat shukriya ji

aap bhi khush rahiyai
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Old 02-12-2006, 12:05 PM
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Originally Posted by saudk
diyaji

bahut hi aacha laga...

lekin nazam to aur bhi aacha lagta agar aap inn sab alfaaz ka meaning bataade to

tabeer
Khadshoon
kurbat
justju

urdu main utna nahin jaanta shayad sab ko patha hai unka meaning par mere liye to yeh ajnabee hai

tareef ka bauhat shukriya

well in lafzoon ka matlab samjhana asaan to nahi lekin koshish karti hoon

tabeer---well khawab ki explanation ko kehtai hain
khadshoon---darr..weham
kurbat---mohabbat k ehsaas ko kehtai hain
justuju---well is ka matlab hai kisi kaam mein interest laina aur usai dil sai karna

lekin shairi mein nazam kai hisaab sai matlab hotai hian in sab lafzoon ka koi aik matlab nahi nikalta

khush rahiyai
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tareef ka bauhat shukriya

well in lafzoon ka matlab samjhana asaan to nahi lekin koshish karti hoon

tabeer---well khawab ki explanation ko kehtai hain
khadshoon---darr..weham
kurbat---mohabbat k ehsaas ko kehtai hain
justuju---well is ka matlab hai kisi kaam mein interest laina aur usai dil sai karna

lekin shairi mein nazam kai hisaab sai matlab hotai hian in sab lafzoon ka koi aik matlab nahi nikalta

khush rahiyai

haan theek kehti aap koyi luvz ek nazam kuch aur doosre nazam mein kuch aur ho sakta hai...lekin phir bhi agar context ki maani samajh le to kaafi hai...
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tareef ka bauhat shukriya

well in lafzoon ka matlab samjhana asaan to nahi lekin koshish karti hoon

tabeer---well khawab ki explanation ko kehtai hain
khadshoon---darr..weham
kurbat---mohabbat k ehsaas ko kehtai hain
justuju---well is ka matlab hai kisi kaam mein interest laina aur usai dil sai karna

lekin shairi mein nazam kai hisaab sai matlab hotai hian in sab lafzoon ka koi aik matlab nahi nikalta

khush rahiyai

haan theek kehti aap koyi luvz ek nazam kuch aur doosre nazam mein kuch aur ho sakta hai...lekin phir bhi agar context ki maani samajh le to kaafi hai...

g haan mein aap sai agree karti hoon aur umeed karti hoon kai is sai aap ki kuch madat hogai hogi

ainda bhi kuch poochna chahain to zaroor poochiyai ga

khush rahiyai
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Asalam-o-Alaikum
wah jee wah tusi kamal likha hai jee
isi tarah likh`tey rehana jee tusi
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Assalam-o-Alaikum dia ji
waaaaaaaaaah bohat hi khoobsoorat tehreer
aaghaz bohat touchy
Alfaaz kabhi tasveer banaya kartai thai
Tumhein khayaloon mein saja kar
Khawaboon ko tabeer banaya kartai thai

saari poem hi bohat outstanding hai
keep writing and sharing
take care a lot
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