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RulesThis is a discussion on ~*~ ajab pagal sa larka hai ~*~ within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; salaam dostoo kaisai hain aap sab umeed karti hoon achai hoongai aaj apni aik aur nazam aap sab kai sath ...
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#1
02-28-2006, 07:06 PM
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salaam dostoo  kaisai hain aap sab umeed karti hoon achai hoongai 1.gif ")1") aaj apni aik aur nazam aap sab kai sath share karnai ja rahi hoon ye nazam mein nai aatif bhai ki nazam "ajab pagal si larki " sai mutasir ho kar likhi hai bas pata nahi kyon dil kiya so likh di yahan mein ye bhi batana chahoongi kai is nazam ka bunyaadi khayal shagufta aapi ka hai aur un ki ye nazam meri pasandeeda nazmoon mein sai aik hai...ye kabhi nahi intention thi kai aapi hurt hoon umeed karti hoon pasand ai gi khush rahiyai ~*~ ajab pagal sa larka hai~*~ Ajab pagal sa larka hai Mujhe har khat mein likhta hai Mujhe tum yaad karti ho ?mujhe bhoolo gi to nahi? Meri ankhain satati hain Mera lehja bulata hai Meri neendain bhi kya tum ko Shab bhar jagaati hain Rim jhim mein ab bhi kya yunhi tum bheegti rehti ho Koi khushboo ka jhonka kya,mera pegham lata hai Kya ab bhi raat phar yunhi taaroon ko ginti ho Tanha is chand sai janaan meri baatain bhi karti ho Sahil sai ishq tumhara kaho waisa hi hai ab bhi Yaan meri yaad mein ab janaan wahan ek naam likhti ho Ajab pagal sa larka hai Mujhe har khat mein likhta hai Mujhe tum yaad karti ho ?mujhe bhoolo gi to nahi? Jawab is ko mein kya ab doon Mein yehi kehti rehti hoon Meri masrufiat dekho Mein har pal uljhi rehti hoon Subha sai shaam hoti hai sirf kamoon mein hi meri Phir duniya kai jhameloon nai Barha di hai ab majboori Mein benaam zanjeeroon mein khud ko qaid paati hoon Kabhi lamhoon ko ginti hoon thora sukoon to mil jai Mujhe fursat nahi milti khud sai bhi milnai ki Na sonai ki khabar hai to na hi jaagtai rehnai ki Haan sahil sai ye ishq mera suno ab bhi waisa hai Fark hai gar to ye kai mein ab ja nahi paati Tumhein kis nai kaha paglai! Mein tumhein yaad karti hoon Mein tumhein bhool jaoongi Bhala khud ko bhula kar bhi Kabhi Koi jee paya hai Mein koshish karti rehti hoo Tum itna yaad na ao Tumhein pal bhar bhool hi jaoon Magar kaisai ye kardoon mein Meri sansain atakti hain Meri ankhain barasti hain Jo ye koshish karoon mein to Meri yaadain tarasti hain Meri har baat mein ab bhi tumhari baat rehti hai Meri har shab mein ab bhi tumhari zaat rehti hai Meri subha bhi hoti hai tumharai khayal sai saji Mere lehjai mein ab bhi tumhari anch rehti hai Tumhein kis nai kaha janaan mujhe tum atai ho Kai yaad un ko hain kartai loog Jinhain who bhool jatai hain Ajab pagal sai larkai ho Meri masrufiat dekho Tumhein mein bhool jaoon to mujhe tum yaad ao na Usai kaisai mein bhooloon jo mujh mein hi basta hai Mere jeevan ki uljhan mein Tumhari who ek hi jumla Mujhe bhoolo gi to nahi Meri chahat ki shiddat ko Madham honai nahi daita Mujhe sapnai dekhata hai ronai nahi daita Shab bhar jagata hai mujhe sonai nahi daita Tumhari ye baat ai janaan Mujhe kitna tarpaati hai Mujhe khud sai juda kar ke Tumharai paas laati hai Ajab pagal sa larka hai Phir bhi Ye sab jaan kar bhi woh Mujhe har khat mein likhtai ho Mujhe tum yaad karti ho ?mujhe bhoolo gi to nahi?
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02-28-2006, 07:25 PM
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 appi buhat khub appi nahi bhoein gi buhat khush rahaein  
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02-28-2006, 07:33 PM
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bohat khoobsoorat nazm hai aapi |
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02-28-2006, 07:41 PM
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zabardast diya aapi....  imaage aur poem doonoon hi hsandaar hain.....  
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02-28-2006, 08:23 PM
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Quote:
Diya aapii pata naheiN aap log yeh nazmaiN kaise likh laytay haiN :cry6 Mujhse to nazam hee naheiN likhii jaatii ... Lagta hai sher wazan meN keh keh ker aisii aadat ho ga'ee hai k be.wazan misra ab dimaaGH compose hee naheiN ker paataa  Nazam likhne waale ko aur image compose kerne waale, dono ko mera salute Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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02-28-2006, 08:30 PM
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bohat khubsoooorat...aur img ke to kiya hi kehnay.....dono ne mil kar kamal kar diya kurriyo...
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02-28-2006, 08:43 PM
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Good poem diya really good composition too. :) Just thought to share this poem by Shagufta which was written long ago before Mr. Aatif wrote his poem on same theme. :) I thought it is necessary (As I have a lot of memories associated with this poem and owner of this very poem, and I would like to put the credit right, instead of going to anyone else, no matters how strong ties people have with the person).  Wa.Salam
__________________ Baray Udaas Din Hein.. Aur Soogwar Rattein... !! jazboon ka khuda jazba mohabbat naam hai jis ka kaya dhal lafzoon mein sakta hai ? samandar kaya kabhi koi koozay mein samaya hai? |
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