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This is a discussion on Ajab Koshish within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; bohat Thak Si Gai Hon Main Acha Bantay Bantay har Baat Pay Chup Rehtay Rehtay her Gham Khamoshi Say Sehtay ...
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#1
11-01-2007, 07:40 AM
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bohat Thak Si Gai Hon Main Acha Bantay Bantay har Baat Pay Chup Rehtay Rehtay her Gham Khamoshi Say Sehtay Sehtay ab Logon Ki Wah Wah Aur Sataishi Jumlay man Ko Shant Naheen Kartay koi Cheez Hai Jo Ander Jalti Hai main Bhi Cheekhna Chalana Chahti Hon main Bhi Rona Aur Sisakna Chahti Hon per Ro Naheen Pati kay Achay Log Kuch Bhi Khonay Per Rotay Naheen Hain Na!         |
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#2
11-01-2007, 08:07 AM
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as-salam-o-alaikum Rameesa Sahiba, kya khoob nazm kahi hy ap ne, isy ham aik achi nasri naazm keh sakty haiN, go k nasri nazm kehna itna aasan kam nahi hy, mager ap ne khoob kiya... sirf aakhri misry k last meiN "na" ka lafz izafi sa laga, is k baghair bhi baat pori ho rahi hy.... isi trha acha acha likhti aur ham se share krti raheN, khush raheN abad raheN...
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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#3
11-01-2007, 10:58 AM
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per Ro Naheen Pati wahh bohat acha khyal hai... khush rahin likhti rahin... 
__________________  MaiN apni piyaas pr raazi rahoN gi, Miray Aanso miray ''DiL'' Ki kafaalat k liy kaafi rahiN gay...!  |
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#4
11-01-2007, 01:13 PM
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sorry repply double hogai thi
__________________  kaash aisa kamal hojayewo mera hum khayal hojaye Last edited by Tariq Aziz; 11-01-2007 at 01:20 PM. |
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#5
11-01-2007, 01:17 PM
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bohut choti umer ma apnay bohut gehri batain kehna shoro kerdi hain, apki nazam mash Allah bohut achi ha, zindagi ko jitni zyada gehrai sey daikogi utna hi zyada duk hoga, is duniya ma koch batain faqat kehnay aor sunnay ya parhnay ki had tak hoti hain jisko hum haqiqat kay roop ma daikna chahtay hain, ju haqiqat ma nazer na anay ki waja sey dil duki hota ha, isliye insan ko haqiqat passand hona chahiye, ju is duniya ma horaha ha aosi ko nazer ma rak ker zindagi guzarni chahiye, achai tu achai hoti ha ye kesi sey badlay ki aomeed per nahi karni chahiye, humain tu bas ye daikna ha kay humain kiya karna chahiye iskay against dosra kiya ker raha ha ye sochna humara kaam nahi, i know zindagi ma akser koch aisay hadsey hojatay hain jahan insan ko khud per taras anay lagta ha, bas aos waqt torey ansoo baha lainay chahiye bohut chupkay sey, is sey mun ka duk halka hojata ha, ma khud bi aisa hi karta hoon  . khush rahoo
__________________ kaash aisa kamal hojayewo mera hum khayal hojaye Last edited by Tariq Aziz; 11-01-2007 at 01:23 PM. |
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#6
11-02-2007, 05:47 PM
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wah bohat achay tarekay se app ne ahsassat ki terjumani ki hai...........khush rahian |
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