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Aik Ghazal

This is a discussion on Aik Ghazal within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Apni nayee ghazal aap tamam sathion ki nazr kar raha houn parh kar apni qeemti raey say zaroor aagah kijiey ...


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Old 06-16-2008, 07:56 PM
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Apni nayee ghazal aap tamam sathion ki nazr kar raha houn parh kar apni qeemti raey say zaroor aagah kijiey ga.

Behtay huay ashkon ki rawani say hua hai
Kuch dukh ka madawa isi paani say hua hai

girtay hain jo paton ki tarah dil mein ab aansoo
yeh yaad ki ik baad-e-khizani say hua hai

ab daikhiey is qissay ka anjam kahan ho
aaghaz tu meri hi kahani say hua hai

ab tak meri pehchan jo mitnay nahin payee
yeh bhi kisi mit'ti si nishani say hua hai

yaadon kay jazeeray mein buhat dukh tu thay laikin
dukh aur siwa naql-e-makani say hua hai

us nay tu kabhi ki hi nahin baat koyee bhi
jo bhi hua khamosh bayani say hua hai

khali hain jo ab tak meray alfaz asar say
yeh sab meri napukhta bayani say hua hai
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zabrdast............
Bahut khoob..........
exellent..........
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Ghazal Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Aai...Sab Say Ziyada Mujhay Maqta Pasand Aaya Hay...Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...
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us nay tu kabhi ki hi nahin baat koyee bhi
jo bhi hua khamosh bayani say hua hai

Bhai wah....kia kehne hain....subhanAllah. ..bohot bohot ziada daad qubool kijye
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Behtay huay ashkon ki rawani say hua hai
Kuch dukh ka madawa isi paani say hua hai
very nice jee.
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jo bhi hua khamosh bayani se hua hai


saukhta_jaan ji kya murassa ghazal kahi hai

maza aa gaya--mashaallah
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wah g kia bat hy shaukat sahib
lutf aya
haqeeqatan ghazal kahi hy ap nay

[i]khali hain jo ab tak meray alfaz asar say
yeh sab meri napukhta bayani say hua hai

kia munkasir mizaji hy
bahrhal qabil e dad o tehsin ....
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Originally Posted by m.shaheen View Post
zabrdast............
Bahut khoob..........
exellent..........
Buhat Buhat shukriya.
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Ghazal Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Aai...Sab Say Ziyada Mujhay Maqta Pasand Aaya Hay...Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...
Ghazal aap ko pasand aayee tu mehnat wasool hui aap ka behud shukriya.
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us nay tu kabhi ki hi nahin baat koyee bhi
jo bhi hua khamosh bayani say hua hai

Bhai wah....kia kehne hain....subhanAllah. ..bohot bohot ziada daad qubool kijye
Buhat shukria janab aap tu khud itnay umdah shayar hain aap ki zarrah nawazi hai.
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