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This is a discussion on * Ah0o0 * within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Asalam-0-Alyekum kaise hain aap sab dost .............. Dostoo aaj taqreeban 1.5 years ke baad Shairyi ki zuban main kuch kehnay ...
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#1
08-31-2006, 07:02 AM
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Asalam-0-Alyekum kaise hain aap sab dost .............. Dostoo aaj taqreeban 1.5 years ke baad Shairyi ki zuban main kuch kehnay ki himaat ki hai tu soocha ke aap sab ke saath share kar looon ............. yeh Sha'iry ki aik nayi SINF hai ...... aap main say aksir is say motarif hi hoon gay aur jo nahi hain unhain batata chalo ke yeh Sinf hum ne Japnees Poetry aur Abrani shai'ry say li hai aur isse HYKU kehtay hain is main sirf 3 misre hote hain aur ager teeeno ka apas main koyi RABT na bhi ho tu wo chalta hai balke Dor'ta hai lekin haan Mojmoiyi (Kul'li) tour par matlab aur mafhoom aik hi hona chahiye .................... .. Ah0o0 --------------------------------------------------------------- Mayre Naseeb main koyi Khushi nahi Ghamoun ka na ab koyi Shumar hai Har Taraf ghubar hai .......... --------------------------------------------------------------- Siyah Sooni Raat hai aur Khamoshiyaan hain Jo Motibar thay unka bhi Aitabar nahi Meray liye Hayat ab Ghamoon ka aik bar hai --------------------------------------------------------------- Faraib hai yeh Rah-e-Hayaat bhi Meri Zindagi main ab koyi Rang nahi Khushi ke Pal udhar day Meri zindagi sanwar day --------------------------------------------------------------- Muje tabah kar tujay yeh ikhtiyaar hai Mera pyaar qarz hai yeh yad rakh Kabhi Chuka na payye ga aisa yeh udhar hai
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#2
08-31-2006, 07:18 AM
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bohot khoob falak bhai  aapki shairi pehli baar perhi aur bohot maza aaya..likhte rahiye aur jeldi jeldi share kijiye k bohot umda likhte hain..
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08-31-2006, 08:20 AM
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Sir Is Se Pehle To Mai Kisi Aisi Sinf Se Mutarif Na Thi Aap Ki Anayat Hai Well Aap Ko Parh Ke Acha Laga |
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08-31-2006, 08:50 AM
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Buhat achay Falak bhai...  khush rahiye....Just for the information... Haiku Japanese shayeri ki aik mukhtasir sinf hay.. aur shayeri ki mukhtasir tareen asnaaf meIN se aik mani jati hay... Iss meiN shayer mazahir-i-qudrat ki waja se paida honay walay fouri jazbaat ka izhaar kerta hay... waisay ye bhi ijazat hay k uss k ilawa bhi baat ker sakay.. laikin uss soorat meiN mehez jazbaat ko hi mozoo banaya jaye... aur herakaat aur usloob ko nahiN.... ye to murawwija soorat thi Haiku ki Japanese meiN.. Urdu mein isay humd, Naat k liye bhi ista'mal kiya ja raha hay.. Jiddat pasand shoura isay Urdu meiN bhi ista'amal ker rahay heiN... iss ki tarkeeb kuch youN hoti hay... pehlay aur teesray misray ka wazan barabar hota hay.. aur doosra misray un donoN se thora bara hota hay... Japanese shayeri meiN isski tarkeeb kuch youN hoti hay.. 5 7 5 ya'ani pehlay aur teesray misray meiN syllables ki ta'adad 5 aur doosray meiN 7... English poetry meiN jab isay use kiya gaya tou syllable se murad angrezi syllable liye gaye.. jo k Japanese k syllables se baray hotay heiN... Urdu meiN Hyku ki sinf per tajurbaat horahay heiN.. aur isski haiyat se mutalliq behas horahi hay.. laikin chand cheezeiN heiN jin per shayer tabqa muttafiq hay 1. Haiku nasri nahiN shairi sinf hay 2. iss ka pehla aur teesra misra hum qafiya hoga 3. doosra misra pehlay aur teesray misray se bara hoga 4. teenouN misrouN ka wazan mukhtalif ho sakta hay.. laikin itna zada na ho k Haiku k husn-i-ikhtisar meiN kami aye... For example aik ye haiku hay Naam adab say lay Saray ojalay phelay hain Esam-e-Mohammad say
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08-31-2006, 12:15 PM
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bhai jee Japneez wali baat tu theek hai main ne confirm kar liya hai lekin yeh sab say pehlay ABRANI main ayee thi aur yeh pakki gal hai .......... aap check kar lijiye ga ........... Ah0o0 1- is ka tu muje pata hai 2- yeh main nai nahi parha ........ matlab jahaan main ne is SINF ka parha hai wahaan aisi koyi baat nahi likhi hoye ... aur main Kitab-e-Shaiyri ........ Asnaf-e-Shairi by Akhtar Shad ki baat kar raha hoon yeh mash'hoor naqad hain inhoon ne Ahmed faraz amjad islam amjad iftikhar arif aur aise hi nami garami shairoon ki books par Ah0o0 kiya hai ......... 3- is baat ka bhi muje maloom nahi lekin yeh baat samaj main ati hai ......... Ah0o0 4- jee yeh baat tu bilkul hi theek hai ........... thanx for the information bhaiya janu |
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08-31-2006, 12:18 PM
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Thankoo Sisso thankoo 1.gif ")1") Khush raho hameshajee Insha ALLAH jab kabhi kuch likha tu zaroor share karoon ga okies |
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08-31-2006, 04:08 PM
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 yeh u nay likha hay balay wai balay ham to samjhatay thay aap ahoooo kay ilawa or kuch nahin keh saktay  phir ham say share na karnay ki wajah  ainda aisa kia to achha nahin ho ga kush rahain or likhtay rahain
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#8
08-31-2006, 04:19 PM
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Gud attemp.........likht e rahey...khush rahye....n ik lamha jee thnx for such info...
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08-31-2006, 06:31 PM
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