Urdu Poetry Forum

<!--QuoteBegin-usuf+Jul 14 2003, 01:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (usuf @ Jul 14 2003, 01:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> nine eleven k baad dunya nay ek naya moR liya hai. dahshat gerdi k khalaaf nayye ittehad banay haiN. to iss iteehad k khalaf bhi log bataiN ker rahay haiN...maiN tu kahta houN sab say baRa dahshat gerd yeh writer hai. adeeb ho ya shair, afsana nawees ho ya novel nigar. drama nigar ho ya film writer, dahsaht gerdi ki ibteda, raastay, tareeqay sabsah pahlayadeebaouN nay hi dikhlaye. society k logouN nay inper amal baad maiN kia. kia aap kissi bhi aisee actual dahshat gerdee kay waqay ko quote kersaktay haiN, jiski misal qabl azeen kissi nah kissi writer nah apnay qalam k zariyeh pesh nah kerchuka ho.

ur views plz [/b][/quote]
hummm


bhaii ADEEBOO ki dehshat gardi kai ham 911 sai pehlay hi moutaraf hain....


pata nahii app ki nazrooN sai hamray adeeboo, musanefooN aur shai'rooN kai woh halata e jabar jangii guzray hein jis mein woh sab aik doosray ki POOL kholnay mein lagay nazar atay hein.... urf e aam mein inko FAKAHIAY bhi kehtay hienn....

[b]Asslam-o-Alaikum,
Ji usuf Bhie,
Aiek Min,Aiek Min, Main Zara Apna Qahwa Ley Aaon Zara Saath Saath Chuski Bhi Lagti Rahey Gi Aoor Bateen Bhi.Keyoon Yahan Chaee(Tea)Ya Qahwa Apna Apna Hai.
Tab Tak,
Jab Tak Key NET Itna Taraki Nahin Karta Keh Qahwa is Key Andar Beeth Kar Pee Sakeen Aoor Pila Sakeen,is Leyee Majboori Hai(Qahwa Apna Apna)

Kheer Yeh Too Mazaq Ki Baat Tharee.

Baat Too Aap Ki Sahi Hai Magar Bhaie Ji,
Phir Baat Woh Hi Aa Jati hai Key Amal Kis Nain Keya,
Parhnin Waloon Nain,Deekhnin waloon Nain Na.
Qasoor Kis Ka Hai,Un Ka Jin Koo inhoon Nain Parha Ya Deekha Aoor Us Par Manfi Andaz Sey Amal Keya.Aoor Agar Yeh Hi Musbat Taeekey Sey Sochtey Too Achaie Ka Pahloo Bhi Nikal Saktey They.

Main Yeh Nahin Kehta Keh,Un Ka Kooi Kasoor Nahin hai.Baat Siraf Yeh Hai Key In sab Adeeb etc.Koo Bhi Chahyee Joo Hamarey Mahool sey Hain(Yani Muslim)Keh Khudara Apni Negative Rawish Sey Baaz Aain Aoor Musbat Andaz Main Likhin Ta -Key Kam Az Kam Aanin Wali Nasleen To Sanwar Sakeen.


Humm,
Sochtey Hain,Aoor Phir Kahin Gey is Barey Main inshaAllah.
Weesey is Barey Main Bohat Kuch Likha Ja Sakta Hai.

Duaa Goo
</b>

<!--QuoteBegin-Bhaii Bhulakkar+Jul 14 2003, 01:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Bhaii Bhulakkar @ Jul 14 2003, 01:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-usuf+Jul 14 2003, 01:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (usuf @ Jul 14 2003, 01:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> nine eleven k baad dunya nay ek naya moR liya hai. dahshat gerdi k khalaaf nayye ittehad banay haiN. to iss iteehad k khalaf bhi log bataiN ker rahay haiN...maiN tu kahta houN sab say baRa dahshat gerd yeh writer hai. adeeb ho ya shair, afsana nawees ho ya novel nigar. drama nigar ho ya film writer, dahsaht gerdi ki ibteda, raastay, tareeqay sabsah pahlayadeebaouN nay hi dikhlaye. society k logouN nay inper amal baad maiN kia. kia aap kissi bhi aisee actual dahshat gerdee kay waqay ko quote kersaktay haiN, jiski misal qabl azeen kissi nah kissi writer nah apnay qalam k zariyeh pesh nah kerchuka ho.

ur views plz [/b][/quote]
hummm


bhaii ADEEBOO ki dehshat gardi kai ham 911 sai pehlay hi moutaraf hain....


pata nahii app ki nazrooN sai hamray adeeboo, musanefooN aur shai'rooN kai woh halata e jabar jangii guzray hein jis mein woh sab aik doosray ki POOL kholnay mein lagay nazar atay hein.... urf e aam mein inko FAKAHIAY bhi kehtay hienn.... [/b][/quote]
nice joke

btw it's not joke section.

<!--QuoteBegin-pardese+Jul 14 2003, 04:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (pardese @ Jul 14 2003, 04:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Asslam-o-Alaikum,
Ji usuf Bhie,
Aiek Min,Aiek Min, Main Zara Apna Qahwa Ley Aaon Zara Saath Saath Chuski Bhi Lagti Rahey Gi Aoor Bateen Bhi.Keyoon Yahan Chaee(Tea)Ya Qahwa Apna Apna Hai.
Tab Tak,
Jab Tak Key NET Itna Taraki Nahin Karta Keh Qahwa is Key Andar Beeth Kar Pee Sakeen Aoor Pila Sakeen,is Leyee Majboori Hai(Qahwa Apna Apna)

Kheer Yeh Too Mazaq Ki Baat Tharee.

Quote:

maiN tu kahta houN sab say baRa dahshat gerd yeh writer hai. adeeb ho ya shair, afsana nawees ho ya novel nigar. drama nigar ho ya film writer, dahsaht gerdi ki ibteda, raastay, tareeqay sabsah pahlayadeebaouN nay hi dikhlaye. society k logouN nay inper amal baad maiN kia

Baat Too Aap Ki Sahi Hai Magar Bhaie Ji,
Phir Baat Woh Hi Aa Jati hai Key Amal Kis Nain Keya,
Parhnin Waloon Nain,Deekhnin waloon Nain Na.
Qasoor Kis Ka Hai,Un Ka Jin Koo inhoon Nain Parha Ya Deekha Aoor Us Par Manfi Andaz Sey Amal Keya.Aoor Agar Yeh Hi Musbat Taeekey Sey Sochtey Too Achaie Ka Pahloo Bhi Nikal Saktey They.

Main Yeh Nahin Kehta Keh,Un Ka Kooi Kasoor Nahin hai.Baat Siraf Yeh Hai Key In sab Adeeb etc.Koo Bhi Chahyee Joo Hamarey Mahool sey Hain(Yani Muslim)Keh Khudara Apni Negative Rawish Sey Baaz Aain Aoor Musbat Andaz Main Likhin Ta -Key Kam Az Kam Aanin Wali Nasleen To Sanwar Sakeen.

Quote:

kia aap kissi bhi aisee actual dahshat gerdee kay waqay ko quote kersaktay haiN, jiski misal qabl azeen kissi nah kissi writer nah apnay qalam k zariyeh pesh nah kerchuka ho.

Humm,
Sochtey Hain,Aoor Phir Kahin Gey is Barey Main inshaAllah.
Weesey is Barey Main Bohat Kuch Likha Ja Sakta Hai.

Duaa Goo
</b> [/quote]
maiN tu apnee black tea without suger hamesha apnay saath leker chalta houN. aap apnee coffee piyeN main apni blk t

baat apki bhi durust hai k goli kiss nay chalai...mager practically goli chalanay wala, gun provider, planner sab k sab darjah darjah mujrim haiN. aap nay bhi taslim kia k adeeb bhi mujrim hai.

wasalamz
ghalat kaha ji ap ne .....
writers tu logon ko entertain karne ke liye jo bhi karte hain
kehtay hain likhtay hain...
woh aesa karne ko nahi kehtay
yeh tu devil mind hotay hain jo in se madad le laitay hain
aik baat note kar lain
pehlay jurm hoa tha phir writers ne likha
writers ko koi khwab nahi aye thi ke aesay jurm karne ka likho
pehlay howa us se guide line hoye aur bus phir....
baat barhti chali gaye...
/ast

<!--QuoteBegin-JiNN+Jul 29 2003, 05:53 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (JiNN @ Jul 29 2003, 05:53 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->wasalamz
ghalat kaha ji ap ne .....
writers tu logon ko entertain karne ke liye jo bhi karte hain
kehtay hain likhtay hain...
woh aesa karne ko nahi kehtay
yeh tu devil mind hotay hain jo in se madad le laitay hain
aik baat note kar lain
pehlay jurm hoa tha phir writers ne likha
writers ko koi khwab nahi aye thi ke aesay jurm karne ka likho
pehlay howa us se guide line hoye aur bus phir....
baat barhti chali gaye...
/ast[/b][/quote]


- writers tu logon ko entertain karne ke liye jo bhi karte hain kehtay hain likhtay hain... woh aesa karne ko nahi kehtay'

(*) baja fermaya. woh aisa kernay ko nahee kahtay.lekin log onsay motassir hoker to aisa kertay haiN. bilKhasoos awamunnas. masoom zehnouN ko masmoom kernay ka kaam to yehi Khatarnaak kahaniyaaN, dramay aur film anjaam detee haiN.


- yeh tu devil mind hotay hain jo in se madad le laitay hain.
(*) phir wohi baat input to letay haiN naa. kiyouN nah input k source ko band kerdia jaye.


- aik baat note kar lain. pehlay jurm hoa tha phir writers ne likha.
(*) aap bhi tasheeh kerlaiN. pahlay writers nay fiction likha maar dhaaR say bherpoor. phir in jaisay waqeaat howay amal pazeer. sahafi events k baad inko qalam band kerta hai. writer events honay say pahlay likh sakta hai. he has imagination power to write.

- writers ko koi khwab nahi aye thi ke aesay jurm karne ka likho. pehlay howa us se guide line hoye aur bus phir....baat barhti chali gaye...
(*) aisa nahee hai meray bhai. writers yani adeeb to rahta hi KhabouN aur KhayalouN maiN. woh society ka kamzore tareen tabqah hai. chunanchah apnay taKhleeq kerdah kiradarouN k zariyeh society say inteqam leta hai.

<!--QuoteBegin-pardese+Jul 16 2003, 01:13 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (pardese @ Jul 16 2003, 01:13 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Asslam-o-Alaikum,

Yeh Bilkul sahi Hai Keh Adeeb Hi Mujrim Hain,
Magar Thora Sa izafa Aoor Karta Chaloon Keh,Har Woh insan Mujrim Hai Jis Key Paas ilam Jeese Iham Doolat Hai Aoor Woh Ham Jeesey Aam insanoon Ko is ilam Key Bal Botey Par Sahi Rastey Ki Bajayee Gumrahi Key Rastey Par Daal Raha Hai Jis Main Sab Sey Zeyada Kirdar Ulama-e-Karam Aoor Phir Writers Adeeb Shaier etc.Ka Hai.

Duaa Goo [/b][/quote]
agreed. her koi apni apni jagah zimmah daar hai.......amoman yeh tassur hai k adeeb o shair masoom hotay hai... iss tassur ko zail kernay k liyeh maiN nay yeh post ki hai... waisay bhi yeh section adab aur adeeb ko deal kerta hai... lehaza adeeb hi zeray bahas aayeh