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08-30-2006, 11:51 AM
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Yaro aik ghazal k sath aik bar phir hazir huN....  aap k tabsry/corrections ka intzaar rahy ga... :::: in roman :::: abhi is zavi'ay pr sochta koi nahi ho ga k sab mit ja'eN gy lekin fana koi nahi ho ga mujhy gham tha k tanhaai meri qismat hy bil-aakhir usy ye zoam tha us se juda koi nahi ho ga Faseel-e La'makaN se mut'tasil seewar se lag kr thaka behtha hy jo, mery siwa koi nahi ho ga mujhy maalum hy raah-e-fana pr mery baad ab tak misaal-e-gerd rasty naapta koi nahi ho ga kuch is andaaz se atraaf maiN bikhra laho us ka k maqtal yuN kbhi pehly saja koi nahi ho ga
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#2
08-30-2006, 12:45 PM
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bohat bohat acha likha hai app nay bohat acha likha hai mujhy gham tha k tanhaai meri qismat hy bil-aakhir usy ye zoam tha us se juda koi nahi ho ga allah ap ka bhala kere bohat acha likha app nay bohat bohat ziadaoo doaaoon kay sath jahan rahain bohat kuch rahian imran
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08-30-2006, 12:51 PM
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Use Ye Zum Tha Ke Us Se Jada Koi Nahi Ho Ga Well Achi Lagi Aap Ki Ghazal Or Sir Mai Or Corrections Mujhe To Abi Khud Seekhne Ki Zaroorat Hai Wel Molla Panjatan Paak Aap Ko Khush Rakhe |
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#4
08-30-2006, 01:28 PM
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wo wo very nice sharing
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08-30-2006, 01:52 PM
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 Abhi Online Aai Aur Aatay Hi Is Qadar Khoobsurat Ghazal Parhi...Mujhay Aap Ki Yeh Ghazal Bouhat Pasand Aai...Her Shair Umda Aur Daad Talab....Dhero'n Daad Qubool Kijiye....
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08-30-2006, 02:12 PM
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mujhy gham tha k tanhaai meri qismat hy bil-aakhir usy ye zoam tha us se juda koi nahi ho ga wah bohat khoobbbbbbbbbbbbb mujhy maalum hy raah-e-wafa pr mery baad ab tak misaal-e-gerd rasty naapta koi nahi ho ga bohat umda faizan bhai.. bohat khoob ilfaz nahe hain gazal ki tareef kerney ko.. humeri traf se dhairoon dadh qabool kerain itni achi gazal kehney per.. aur correction aur tabsrey tuuu hum ker nahe saktey kyun ke hum tuu kudh abhi seekh rahey hain... wase mujhey umeedh hey zain bhi aur Moin bhai kuch na kuch tuu zroor kahin gey ager un ko kuch mila kehney ko tuu... wase ik dafa phir bohat se dadh faizan bhai itni achi gazal kehney per ALLAH ap ko sada kush rakhey aur ALLAH ap ke kalam main aur taqaat paida kerey. ALLAH ap ko her medain main kamyab kerey. Ameen Sum Ameen
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08-30-2006, 04:43 PM
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khubsuraat hud tuk khoob kahi hai ghazal allah app ko khush rakhay ameen
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08-30-2006, 06:40 PM
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wah jee bohat khub......bohat acha kalam janab khush rahey... 1.gif ")1") |
Ghazal - abhi is zavi'ay pr sochta koi nahi ho ga 
