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RulesThis is a discussion on abhi is zavi'ay pr sochta koi nahi ho ga within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by primitive mujhy gham tha k tanhaai meri qismat hy bil-aakhir usy ye zoam tha us se juda ...
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#31
08-31-2006, 06:26 AM
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ye aap ki mohabat hy k aap is andaaz se sochty haiaN.... Allah Mola aap ko dheroN khushiaN aur berkateN ata kary... Aamin.
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#32
08-31-2006, 10:19 AM
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 humn to abhi nay hain aur zain sahib ki ghazal per naqas si ray day kar abhi dobara jab online huay to aap ki ghazal padhi yaqeen kijay ga achhi ghazal hay bohot hi achhi ghazal jissay hum padhna chahtay hain bar bar bohot hi mubarak kay mustahiq hain aap aur haan aap kab say likh rahay hain aur kia kissi say kuchh seekha bhi hay aap nay kyunkay aapkay lafzon main badi baat hay aur yeh aik din main nahin aa jaati zaroor aap kissi say istifaada hasil kartay hongay ? wagarnaa yun to zain bhai bhi achhi ghazal likhnay ki koshish kartay hain magar woh talaazmay per aur arooz per tawajja daitay daitay mazmoon ko hi kahin ka kahin lay jaatay hain abhi kisi or ko kam hi padha hay magar hamain yeh site achhi lagi kuchh samajh boojh hay tanqeed kartay hain magar islaahi na kay ......... achha ji ijaazat dijay aapka QUILL |
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#33
08-31-2006, 01:03 PM
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bohat shukriya jnaab k aap ne meri ghzal ko is qabil samjha & us pr apni qeemti raa'y pesh ki... jnaab mujhy likhty kuch ziada arsa nahi hoa... yehi koi teesra(3) sal chal raha hy.... and u know im enjoying it... yar pata hy jab aik sher hota hy to kitni khushi hoti hy (us karb k sath sath, jo is sher ki takhleeq ka baa'is banta hy)... (un-expressable....) sher to bikul aap k bachoN ki trha hoty haiN... jin maiN rafta rafta nikhaar aata jata hy... Zain Bhai aik achy shair haiN... aur bohat umda ghazal likhty haiN.... mera khyaal hy abhi aap ne un ka kalam nahi parha.... inshallah aap ko yahaN bohat se logoN ki tehreereN parhny ko mileN gi jo ham se bhi acha likhty haiN... aur ye site to hy hi achi, aap ko kyuN'na achi lagti... its just like a family... a place where u feel like at Home.... so be a member of family here.. and enjoy the taste of good company... ye phool aap k liay @};- |
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#34
08-31-2006, 02:15 PM
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Buhat hi umdah... buhat hi a'ala... kia baat hay... aik aik shair buhat khoobsoorat... kia baat hay Ustad ji... maza agaya qasam se...  mujhy gham tha k tanhaai meri qismat hy bil-aakhir usy ye zoam tha us se juda koi nahi ho ga kis kis shair ko quote karay insan... her shair aik se barh ker aik... aur maqta... kia hi khoob kaha hay... U know what aap k andaz-i-BayaaN meiN aik khaas baat hay Faizan bhai.. baysakhtagi her her harf se tapakti hay... aur her lafz k liye aisa lagta hay jaisay wo jis jaga mojood hay.. shayad bana hi uss jaga k liye hay shayeri k saray ramooz ka khayaal rakhtay huway.. itni ujli aur suthri shayeri.. Let me be your FAN.. Khush rahiye... Likhtay rahiye
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#35
08-31-2006, 06:43 PM
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mujhy gham tha k tanhaai meri qismat hy bil-aakhir usy ye zoam tha us se juda koi nahi ho ga wah wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kya hi kehnay faizan bhai................ . bohat khooob......... bohat pasand aee aap ki ghazal,,,,,,,, keep sharing
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#36
09-02-2006, 05:51 AM
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aap ki mohabat hy jo aap itni izat se nawazty haiN... wagarna maiN to aap se bhi islaah ka drkhwastgaar huN.... Allah Mola aap ko meri ghazloN pr tnqeed ki taufeeq ata fermaa'ay...(heheheh h) wish u all the best... |
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#37
09-02-2006, 06:04 AM
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yaar aap kamal ka likhte ho very nice
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