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abhi is zavi'ay pr sochta koi nahi ho ga

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Old 08-30-2006, 09:09 PM
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Assalam-o-alaikum
Buhat undah ghazal kahi hay app ne
har shair buhat hi umdah hay dhairon daad qabool kijiay
bass zara sa is neche diay gay shair ko phir se dekh lijiay ga
shayad app urdu main likhne main kuch ghalat hogaya hay app se

kuch is andaaz se atraaf maiN bikhra laho mera
k maqtal yuN kbhi pehly saja koi nahi ho ga

hamari janib se buhat si daad qabool kijiay
khush rahiay abad rahiay
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bohat bohat acha likha hai app nay bohat acha likha hai


mujhy gham tha k tanhaai meri qismat hy bil-aakhir
usy ye zoam tha us se juda koi nahi ho ga

allah ap ka bhala kere bohat acha likha app nay

bohat bohat ziadaoo doaaoon kay sath
jahan rahain bohat kuch rahian
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jnaab itni taareef ka bohat shukriya... ager aap ko dil se meri kawish pasand aai to maiN samjajhta huN meri mehnat ka samar mil gai...

Allah Mola aap ko hmesha khush rakhy...
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wah wah janab bohut khoob ...
MasahaALLAH bohut khobsoorat likha hai aap nay
ji khush kiya hai bhai aaj tu
lagay raho ... matlab KEEP IT UP
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Use Ye Zum Tha Ke Us Se Jada Koi Nahi Ho Ga
Well Achi Lagi Aap Ki Ghazal Or Sir Mai Or Corrections Mujhe To Abi Khud Seekhne Ki Zaroorat Hai Wel Molla Panjatan Paak Aap Ko Khush Rakhe
thanks Khayal, k aap ko meri ghazal pasand aai..

Allah Mola aap ko bohat ata kary....
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mujhy gham tha k tanhaai meri qismat hy bil-aakhir
usy ye zoam tha us se juda koi nahi ho ga


Yaqeenan Behad khoobsoorat ghazal kahi.. mudarja baala shair to bohat hi pasand aayaa.. MashaAllah..dhairo'n daad aap ke besh baha qalam ki nazar.. @};-

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wo wo very nice sharing
bohat shukriya Asif Bhai....
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