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RulesThis is a discussion on Abhi Mohabbaton k hisaar main hoo within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Dear Hallagulla fellows and poetry lovers yoon too kafi arsay say Sha-eri kar raha hoo mager yeh pehla maoqaa hay ...
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09-20-2007, 09:00 AM
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Dear Hallagulla fellows and poetry lovers yoon too kafi arsay say Sha-eri kar raha hoo mager yeh pehla maoqaa hay k yahan hallgulla per aap k goosh guzar kar raha hoon. iss leyay umeed-e-Qawi hay k aap ki hoslaa afzai saath rahay gi. " Abi mohabbatoon k hisaar main hoo jaisay phool beech bahaar main hoo uss nay bewafai seekhe nahe hay soo abhi uss k shumaar main hoo yeh dukh-o-sukh k baham ta-al-luk Jaisay reshta lail-o-nahaar main hoo" Shabby 2oth Sep 2007 Aap ki aaaraa aur hoslaa afzai k kha-hish mandd                  |
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09-20-2007, 09:32 AM
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 khush amdeed Ahmed sahab.. 1.gif ")1") umda asha'r kahay aapne.. dad qubool kijiye... aur mashq jari rakhiye.. pehlay shair maiN thori si tabdeeli kar rahi hooN ... daikhiye.. muhabbatoN k hisar maiN ho k jaisay ghuncha bahaar maiN ho.. isi tarah say baqi asha'r bhi daikhiye ga.. khush rahiye
__________________  . . . Mere dil.. Mere musaafir..! |
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09-20-2007, 09:57 AM
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mager nay jo tarkeeb ikhtiyaar ki uss ki logic aur wajoohaat hain pehlay misray main Abhi ka lafz yeh zahir kar raha hay k yeh waqtii kai-fi-yat hay. mohabbatin aaj kal main bahoot jaldi muntaqil ho jati hain. phool beech bahar main k matlab yeh k choo k mohabbat naee hay iss leyay jaisay phool bahar main ghiraa hota hay iss tara say mukhatib bheee mohabat ka center hai. key akheyaal hai. please comment |
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09-20-2007, 09:57 AM
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mager nay jo tarkeeb ikhtiyaar ki uss ki logic aur wajoohaat hain pehlay misray main Abhi ka lafz yeh zahir kar raha hay k yeh waqtii kai-fi-yat hay. mohabbatin aaj kal main bahoot jaldi muntaqil ho jati hain. phool beech bahar main k matlab yeh k choo k mohabbat naee hay iss leyay jaisay phool bahar main ghiraa hota hay iss tara say mukhatib bheee mohabat ka center hai. keya kheyaal hai. please comment |
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09-20-2007, 11:12 AM
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baqi ap yaqeenan mujh say behtar samajhtay hoNgay.. khush rahiye |
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09-20-2007, 12:11 PM
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 bahoot shukreyya waisy wazan k hawaly aur rhtehm k lehaz say main aap say mutafiqq hoon. umeed hay mustqbil main bhee aap ki aaraa aur mashwroon say faizyaab honay k maoqa milta rahay ga aap bhee khush rahain hamesha |
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09-20-2007, 12:41 PM
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aik aur nazm aap ki sama-atoon ki nazar " Ankhooon k darechoon main Ansoo ban k rehta hoon Haan bahot khush hoon,hans hans k yeh kehta hoon Uss ki mohabbat main , lamha lamha jeeta hoon aur bay-wafa-i uss ki baray sha-oq say sehta hoon Zindgee k saray Dukh teh-e-dil main jazb hotay hain han mager kabhi kabhaar, ansoo ban k behta hoon Shabby 20 sep' 07 Tanqeed aur tasihh ka mutazirr |
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09-20-2007, 04:06 PM
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bohot achche khayalat hain...alfaaz ka intekhaab bhi achcha hai ke saadgi se husn paida karna chaha hai...bas behr aur wazan ki taraf tawajju dijye...is maamle main zara kami hai |
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09-20-2007, 06:14 PM
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Abhi Mohabbaton k hisaar main hoo 
