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Old 08-20-2006, 09:48 PM
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ABHI KUCH DARD BAQI HAY..
ABHI KUCH DARD BAQI HAY..
AGAR-CHAH WAQT MARHAM HAY..
MAGAR KUCH WAQT LAGTTA HAY..
KISI KO BHUL JAANAY MAIN..
DO-BARA DIL BASAANAY MAIN
ABHI KUCH WAQT LAGNA HAY..
ABHI KUCH DARD BAQI HAY..
ABHI TAU JISM-O-WAJDAAN MAIN..
WAHI IK FARD BAQI HAY..
ABHI KUCH DARD BAQI HAY..
ABHI US SHAKHS KI MUJH PAR..
NIGAH-E-SARD BAQI HAY..
ABHI TAU ISHQ RASTOON MAIN..
PARI JO DHUL THI MUJH PAR..
ABHI WOH DHUL BAQI HAY..
ABHI TAU JISM-E-LARAZAAN PAY..
LAGAY JAFA K ZAKHMON PAY..
WAFA KA KHUN BAQI HAY..
ABHI TAU ISHQ RAAH MAIN..
LUTTI JO CHAHATAIN APNNI..
SABHI KA QARZ BAQI HAY...
ABHI KUCH DARD BAQI HAY..

ABHI KUCH DARD BAQI HAY.
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hazrat aap likhtay tu no doubt bohut achha hai
is nazm ka flow mujhay kaafi achha laga hai

laikin yeh aap kaya har waqt udas hi rehtay hain ??? matlab kisi or mood ki poem bhi share kar diya karain ...

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Old 08-20-2006, 10:29 PM
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bahot khoob mohtaram/mohtarma,bahot khoobsurat nazam kahi aap ne,daad qabool kijiye,

aek guzaarish hai ke PLEASE aek din main aek hi thread post kiya kijiye,ke parne waale us ko bakhoobi par sakain,aor apni raaye ka izhaar kar sakain,......aor ho sake to baaqi saathiyon ki post ki huyi shaairy ko bhi para karain,aor un par apni raaye ka izhaar bhi kar diya karain,mumkin hai aap ke chand alfaaz kissi ke sakoon o itmenaan ka zariya ban jaayain,
bahot khush rahiye,aor likhte rahiye,ke achha likhte/likhti hain aap,
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bahot khoob mohtaram/mohtarma,bahot khoobsurat nazam kahi aap ne,daad qabool kijiye,

aek guzaarish hai ke PLEASE aek din main aek hi thread post kiya kijiye,ke parne waale us ko bakhoobi par sakain,aor apni raaye ka izhaar kar sakain,......aor ho sake to baaqi saathiyon ki post ki huyi shaairy ko bhi para karain,aor un par apni raaye ka izhaar bhi kar diya karain,mumkin hai aap ke chand alfaaz kissi ke sakoon o itmenaan ka zariya ban jaayain,
bahot khush rahiye,aor likhte rahiye,ke achha likhte/likhti hain aap,
INFACT ZAIN BHAI MAIRRA BOHAT KUM AANA HOTTA HAY,INFACT I M RECENT GRADUATE IN MEDICINE,CURRENTLY PREPARING FOR SPECIALIZATION,SO AAP MAIRAY PROFESSION KI MASROFIAT KA ANDAAZA KAR SAKTTAY HAIN,ITS 24 HR JOB,ANYHOW KOSHISH KAROON GA AAINDA AIK QWAQT MAIN AIK CHEEZ HE SHARE KAROON,..DAAD K LIAY NAWAZISH
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hazrat aap likhtay tu no doubt bohut achha hai
is nazm ka flow mujhay kaafi achha laga hai

laikin yeh aap kaya har waqt udas hi rehtay hain ??? matlab kisi or mood ki poem bhi share kar diya karain ...

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INFACT MOHSIN SAHIB,SHAIRI KA MIZAJ HE MUZMAHIL HAY,ISSI RANG MAIN HE ACHI LAGTTI HAY AUR KUCH APNI PERSONALITY HE AISSI HAY..ANY HOW AIK CHEEZ SIRF AAP K KAHNNAY PAR..WARNA ZAIN BHAI AB BAS KA KAH CHUKKAY HAIN..
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INFACT MOHSIN SAHIB,SHAIRI KA MIZAJ HE MUZMAHIL HAY,ISSI RANG MAIN HE ACHI LAGTTI HAY AUR KUCH APNI PERSONALITY HE AISSI HAY..ANY HOW AIK CHEEZ SIRF AAP K KAHNNAY PAR..WARNA ZAIN BHAI AB BAS KA KAH CHUKKAY HAIN..
mere bhahi,main ne BAS ka naheen kaha,aap shaoq se apni shaairy post kijiye,hamain khushi ho gi,...main ne to sirf itni si guzaarish ki hai ke aek din main aek thread post karain,us ke 2 faaide hain,..aek to yeh ke parne waale aap ki shaairy ko itmenaan aor dil jammi se par sakain ge,aor doosara us par apne ta.suraat bhi tehreer kar sakain ge,aor phir doosare members ko bhi to maoqa milna chaahiye na ke woh bhi kuchh post kar sakain,bas itni si baat hai,
bahot khush rahiye.
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wahhh.. Bohat hi umdah.. ye nazam mujhe bhi bohat pasand hai .. pesh kernay ka Behad Shukria.. magar sahib.. issay .. poet's club mein nahi .. shair-o-shairi ke section mein hona chahiye... Poet's club mein sirf apni zaati shairi pesh kertay hein.. Bohat Nawazish.. @};-

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acha likha hai !!!!
pasand aai aappki post , keep writing
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