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This is a discussion on Aansu within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; ASSALAM-O-ALAIKUM, WC,aur SOS waghera meiN last month topic tha"AANSU" to aesey hi zehn mein aik sher aaya aur phir baqi ...
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12-02-2007, 04:39 AM
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ASSALAM-O-ALAIKUM, WC,aur SOS waghera meiN last month topic tha"AANSU" to aesey hi zehn mein aik sher aaya aur phir baqi bhi...i dont know k is zameen per pehley kisi ney likha hai ya nahin...wesey yaqinun likha hoga 1.gif ")1") kher jo bana wo aap k saamney hai...magar abhi is ko mazeed aagey barrhaney ka dil chah raha hai humara...filhal ye ashAar bardasht kareN aur raey zaroooooooooooorrrr dein bhaley achi ho ya buri...khamiyaan to zaroor hi bataya karenDekhen to faqat maey sey bun jatey hain aansu Sochen to kuch fasaney kahey jatey hain aansu Jub dil k samandar mein machi ho koi halchul AankhoN k kattoroN sey chalak jatey haiN aansu Gham laakh chupaooN maiN pardoN mein hansi k Sawan ki ghatta bun k baras jatey haiN aansu Saaya bhi dagha jub k dey jata hai shab ko Us waqt bhi sung mera nibha jatey haiN aansu Her cheez ka kuch mole hai manddi mein jahaN ki Biktey na kisi mole wo anmole haiN aansu Bhanwrey ki jafaoN pey ho matam jo kali ka Shabnum ki nami mein kabhi dhal jatey haiN aansu SadyoN sey ye insaan ki aankhoN k makeeN haiN Ghar apna kabhi chorre k jatey nahiN aansu (S.N.Neha)
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#2
12-02-2007, 07:47 PM
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Do shaire individually bohot pasand aye: 1) Har cheez ka kuch mol hai manDi maiN jahaaN ki Biktay na kisi mol, wo anmol haiN aaNsoo 2)BhaNwray ki jafaaoN pe ho matam jo kali ka Shabnam ki nami maiN kabhi Dhal jatay haiN aaNsoo Technical masle kafi hain lekin sab se barh kar to ye ke ye ghazal ya nazm donon main qualify nahin kar rahi....isko dobara dekho aur kisi aik direction par le jaao
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12-03-2007, 09:55 PM
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Sarabz sahab ki raye se main bhi muttaffiq hun...is main tabdeeliyon ki zaroorat hai |
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12-04-2007, 10:56 AM
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Dekhen to faqat maey sey bun jatey hain aansu Sochen to kuch fasaney kahey jatey hain aansu Jub dil k samandar mein machi ho koi halchul AankhoN k kattoroN sey chalak jatey haiN aansu Gham laakh chupaooN maiN pardoN mein hansi k Sawan ki ghatta bun k baras jatey haiN aansu Saaya bhi dagha jub k dey jata hai shab ko Us waqt bhi sung mera nibha jatey haiN aansu Her cheez ka kuch mole hai manddi mein jahaN ki Biktey na kisi mole wo anmole haiN aansu Bhanwrey ki jafaoN pey ho matam jo kali ka Shabnum ki nami mein kabhi dhal jatey haiN aansu SadyoN sey ye insaan ki aankhoN k makeeN haiN Ghar apna kabhi chorre k jatey nahiN aansu bohut he khubsurat ghazal kahi he , lajawaab he , mubarak ho bohut daad qabool kijye, intahai saadgi ke saath aap ne bohut khubsurat khayalaat pesh kiye hain aur bari kaifiyaat aur rawaani he , kalaam main, |
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12-04-2007, 02:32 PM
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Bohat Umda Khiyalat Hain........ Issi Tarah Acha Acha Likhti Rahian Aur Hamary Sath Share Karti Rahian....... Sada Khush Rahain.
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