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RulesThis is a discussion on aanchal teri yadoN ka bhigo deti hy barish within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; as-salam-o-alaikum dosto! in dinoN masroofiat ki waja se hazir nahi ho pa raha... pichly dinoN saraabz bhai ki aik ghazal ...
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#1
10-12-2007, 07:45 PM
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as-salam-o-alaikum dosto! in dinoN masroofiat ki waja se hazir nahi ho pa raha... pichly dinoN saraabz bhai ki aik ghazal paRhi to apny 4 shair yaad aa g'ay, us waqt share na kar saka, ab socha k waqt hy to ap se share kr duN... sochoN pe jami gard ko dho deti hy barish aanchal teri yadoN ka bhigo deti hy barish hans hans k sunati hy jahaN bher k fasany pochuN tery bary meiN to ro deti hy barish yadoN ki mehak ho k tery hijr k taa'ny chup chaap maiN rakh leta huN, jo deti hy barish lagty haiN kisi aur hi dunya k manazar hayrat mery ehsaas ko wo deti hy barish... aap ki aara ka muntazir, faizan
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10-12-2007, 08:24 PM
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WT ji .................... ... hum waise hi kisi ko miss ker rahe they aap ne yeh ashaar suna k mazeed udaas ker dia ................... aap ki kavish buhat achi lagi mager me udaas ho gayi phir se bas likhtey rehiyein or share kerte rehiyein khush rahein abaad rahein 
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10-12-2007, 08:42 PM
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waalikum salam yadon ki mehak ho k teray hijjar k tannay chup chap main rakh leta hon jo deti hai barish... wahhh............kho b bohat khoob hai ji bohat acha laga parh kar....nam sa ehsas de gia ye shair bohat khush rahin aisay he shandaar likhtay rahin 
__________________  Ab os k baad laga DiL to DiL lagi hogi Hum os pe apni mohabt tamaam kr aaye...!  |
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10-12-2007, 09:31 PM
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very nice faizan bahi bohat khub likha.....bohat maza aya parh k sada khush rahiye
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10-12-2007, 09:36 PM
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walaikum Asslam faizan MASHALLAh se aap jab likhtey hain kamal ka likh detey hain bohut arsey bad itna mas hoor kardene wala kalam parh rahi hoon mandraja bala misra aur aik sher haasil e ghazal laga dheron daad aap k naam pochuN tery bary meiN to ro deti hy barish yadoN ki mehak ho k tery hijr k taa'ny chup chaap maiN rakh leta huN, jo deti hy barish
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10-12-2007, 11:44 PM
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yadoN ki mehak ho k tery hijr k taa'ny chup chaap maiN rakh leta huN, jo deti hy barish wah wah wah Faizaan dil nikaal liya tumharay iss sher ne bht umdaah ghazal para khush raho
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10-12-2007, 11:48 PM
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 (joking)duaoN ka aur pasandeedgi ka bohat shukriya.. ap bhi khush raheN aabad raheN... |
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10-13-2007, 02:19 AM
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aanchal teri yadoN ka bhigo deti hy barish 
