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RulesThis is a discussion on Aakhri Sawal!(2nd Try) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; AAKHRI SAWAL k unwan sey humney aik nazam Contest mein share kerney k liyey likhi thi...phir socha k aik try ...
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#1
11-25-2007, 05:18 AM
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 AAKHRI SAWAL k unwan sey humney aik nazam Contest mein share kerney k liyey likhi thi...phir socha k aik try zara doosri qisam ki kee jaey,pata nahin wo kisi ko pasand aaey bhi k nahiN...phir jo bhi zehn mein ata gaya wo kuch yun bana tha...  (Humara nahiN khayal k is meiN hum sahi sey alfaz ka chunaO ya khayal pesh ker paey hain)bus jo ungliyaaN likhti gaeeN wo likh daala...aur kuch lines to abhi abhi nazil hoeeN... ab aap loge isey bardasht kijyey aur agar hosakey to apni raey sey zaroor nawaziyey  Mila tha aik ajnabi... YaheeN kaheeN'yaheeN kaheeN Naee naee theeN manzilein Naey naey they raastey DiloN k sooney deyar meiN Naey naey kanwal khiley Jo zindagi ki dourr meiN Tanha they'hum qadam chaley Humari chahtoN k kuch Naey fasaney bun gaey jo din paharr they kabhi Wo din paloN mein cutt gaey Phir aik din wo keh uttha Suno Aey humsafar meri...! Sawal tujhsey hai mera MuhabbatoN ki raah meiN Jo chal parrey haiN hum yunhi Ye ajnabi sa raasta Sada yuN taey karogi kya? Chalo k aaj haath mein Hum haath apney daal leiN Hum is adhoorey saath ko RafaqatoN meiN dhaal leiN To us k yuN sawal per NigaheN meri jhuk gaeeN Meri ana k haath meiN LagameiN meri kas gaeeN Na kuch jawab bun parra Us aakhri sawal ka Merey na pas tha jawab Sarapa wo sawal tha Phir usko janey kya hoa Wo raasta badal gaya Meri sada ki pohnch sey Wo aik dam nikal gaya Merey qadam bhi utth parrey WaheeN sey maiN palatt parri Meri ana bhi us lamhey Mujhey hara k hans parri Magar jo wo chala gaya To ab mujhey pata chala Us aakhri sawal ka Ye aakhri jawab tha Mujhey bhi us sey pyar hai Mujhey bhi intizar tha Magar mila bhi ab to kya Na wo raha'na hum rahey Humarey saamney haiN ab Judaii k sutooN kharrey
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#2
11-25-2007, 11:25 AM
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slam achi kavish hee congratulation |
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11-25-2007, 10:10 PM
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Bohot hi umda meri behen, bohot hi shandar likha tha tum ne, ek do jagah par rawani ka masla hai, wo tum dobara khud parh kar durust kar sakti ho, but overall bohot khubsoorat nazm hai, aur chand ek lines to itni besakhta hain ke seedhi dil ko ja lagti hain....maslan ye ke Jo din pahaaR thay kabhi, wo din paloN maiN kaT gaye (Wahhhhhhhh) Aur phir ye Mere qadam bhi uTh paRay, waheeN se maiN palaT paRi Meri anaa bhi us lamhe, mujhe hara ke haNs paRi (bohot hi umda, shandar)
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11-26-2007, 12:16 AM
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11-26-2007, 12:19 AM
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11-26-2007, 12:26 AM
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hmmm...aik to yahan garrbarr hai... Tanha they'hum qadam chaley koshish jari hai...dekhen kub sahi line humari aqil mein samati hai aik bar phir sey bohttt Shukriya khush rahen |
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11-26-2007, 08:32 AM
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Bohat Khoob Bohat Achi Nazm ...........zabardast
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