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This is a discussion on Aakhri Sawal within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; HG Poets club kay tamam saathiyon ki khidmat mein salam, Muqabla-e-nazm goyee November kay liyay diyay gayay mauzu par main ...
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#1
11-09-2007, 08:30 PM
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HG Poets club kay tamam saathiyon ki khidmat mein salam, Muqabla-e-nazm goyee November kay liyay diyay gayay mauzu par main nay bhi aik nazm likhi hai jo aap saub say share kar raha houn. Main chounkeh isay muqablay ka hissa nahin banana chahta tha is liyay alag say post kar raha houn aap ki aara ka intezar rahay ga. AAKHRI SAWAL Meray Khuda woh hamaray sawal kaun say thay keh jin kay badlay mein aisay hamain jawab milay woh jurm kiya thay hamaray hamain bata tu sahi keh hum ko jin ki sazaon mein yeh azab milay abhi tu raah-e-amal mein qadam hi rakha tha keh har taraf say masaail kay saanp dasnay lagay abhi tu urnay ko par bhi nahin thay phailayay na jaanay kitnay hi sayyad jaal kasnay lagay na jaanay kis liyay tabeerain sub guraizan rahin keh hum nay khawab bhi palkon pay na sajayay thay huyee thi jabr zara si bhi muskurahat kiyoun abhi tu hont yeh hansna na seekh payay thay hamain jalanay lagi kis liyay zamanay ki dhoop kisi bhi zulf ki chaon mein hum na baithay thay hamari aankhon mein kiyoun is qadar ghubar bhara abhi tu hum nay koyee rung bhi na daikhay thay Khudaya tujh say bus ik AAKHRI SAWAL hai yeh kuch ab sukoon kay lamhay bhi hum ko mil jaain hamari bhi tu koyee aarzooain poori houn hamaray dil mein bhi thoray gulab khil jaain Anis Hasan         |
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#2
11-09-2007, 10:38 PM
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wah ji wah.....Anees Sahab....bohut umda nazm kahi hai....lekin aap ise competition se bahar kiun rakhna chahte hain? |
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#3
11-10-2007, 12:19 PM
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Anis Bhai...bohot hi umda aur khubsoorat nazm kahi hai...dher saari daad qubool kijye....main bhi yahi poochoonga ke aap isko muqable ka hissa kion nahin banana chahte?
__________________ ******************** ******************* MaiN bulata to hooN usko magar aye jazba-e-dil Us pe ban jaye kuch aisi ke bin aaye na banay (Ghalib) |
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#4
11-10-2007, 01:31 PM
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boht khoob 1.gif ")1") likhtay raheay 
__________________ KION HAY ANDHERI SHAB E GHAM HAY BALAOUN KA NAZWAL AAJ IDHAR HI KO RAHAY GA DEEDA E AKHTAR KHULA |
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#5
11-12-2007, 04:19 AM
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Nazm pasand karnay ka buhat shukriya. Comeptition say bahar rakhnay ki jahan tak baat hai tu mera khayal hai keh yeh competition naujawan saathiyon ki hosla afzayee aur seekhnay ka aik zariya hai is liyay main is mein shamil nahin ho raha. Anis Hasan |
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11-12-2007, 04:29 AM
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Nazm ki pasnadeedgi ka buhat shukriya aur aap ki doosri baat ka jawab main ooper dai chuka houn. Anis Hasan |
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11-12-2007, 04:30 AM
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Anis Hasan |
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11-12-2007, 04:40 PM
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abhi tu urnay ko par bhi nahin thay phailayay na jaanay kitnay hi sayyad jaal kasnay lagay wah...bohat khoob...meri traf se dher sari dad qabol kijiye.....
__________________  MaiN apni piyaas pr raazi rahoN gi, Miray Aanso miray ''DiL'' Ki kafaalat k liy kaafi rahiN gay...!  |
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#9
11-13-2007, 11:39 PM
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WALAIKUM ASSALAM, MASHAALLAH...bohtttt tt khoob likkha Bhai... Zabardast! aur compitition mein na shamil kerney wali baat humen bhi samajh nahin aarahi thi...aur ab waja jan ker aapki aala zarfi ki daad detey hain... ALLAH karey zor-e-qalam aur zyadaaa... Khush raheN
__________________  ... Aim ... |
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#10
11-14-2007, 06:51 AM
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Anis Saheb Bohat achi nazm likhi aap ney. Umda khayalaat aur bala ki rwani. Lutf aa gaya. Bher poor daad qabool ki jiye. Kher andesh Qamar Zaman |
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