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Wa Alikum Assalam
Masha Allah Bohaut He Achi Nazam Kahe Hae .. !
Bohaut Sari Daad Hamari Janab Say Itni Achi Kawish Par ..!
Khush Rahain ....... Likhtay Rahain . !
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as-salam-o-alaikum Anis bhai,

bohat umda nazm kahi hy aap ne, is daur meiN paband nazm kehny ki riwayat kam hoti ja rahi hy, mager paband paira'ay meiN nazm kehny ka lutf aaj bhi wesa hi hy jesa Faiz, Saahir aur phir Mustafa Zaidi k daur meiN tha... bohat acha laga aap ki nazm paRh kr, nazm ka ikhtitaam khoob hy:

Khudaya tujh say bus ik AAKHRI SAWAL hai yeh
kuch ab sukoon kay lamhay bhi hum ko mil jaain
hamari bhi tu koyee aarzooain poori houn
hamaray dil mein bhi thoray gulab khil jaain

meri janib se boaht si daaad, is qadar achi nazm kehny pr wasool kreN...

wesy dusry band ka dusra shair paRh kr daf'atan mujhy Akhtar Usman sahab ka shair yaad aa gy, aap ki nazr ki'ay deta huN:

abhi to par bhi nahiN tolta uRaan ko maiN,
bila jawaz khaTakTa huN aasmaan ko maiN....

Allah Mola aap ko khush rakhy... youNhi khoob se khoob ter likhty aur ham se share krty raheN....
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abhi tu urnay ko par bhi nahin thay phailayay
na jaanay kitnay hi sayyad jaal kasnay lagay
wah...bohat khoob...meri traf se dher sari dad
qabol kijiye.....
Mohtarma Knawal Saheba,

Aap ki dher sari daad ka dher sara shukriya.

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WALAIKUM ASSALAM,

MASHAALLAH...bohtttt tt khoob likkha Bhai... Zabardast!
aur compitition mein na shamil kerney wali baat humen bhi samajh nahin aarahi thi...aur ab waja jan ker aapki aala zarfi ki daad detey hain...
ALLAH karey zor-e-qalam aur zyadaaa...
Khush raheN
Neha behan,

Aap ki tareef aur duaon ka buhat shukriya.

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Bohat achi nazm likhi aap ney. Umda khayalaat aur bala ki rwani. Lutf aa gaya. Bher poor daad qabool ki jiye.

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Aap ki daad aur tehseen kay liyay behud mashkoor houn.

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Wa Alikum Assalam
Masha Allah Bohaut He Achi Nazam Kahe Hae .. !
Bohaut Sari Daad Hamari Janab Say Itni Achi Kawish Par ..!
Khush Rahain ....... Likhtay Rahain . !
Aap ki daad aur duaon ka buhat shukriya janab.

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as-salam-o-alaikum Anis bhai,

bohat umda nazm kahi hy aap ne, is daur meiN paband nazm kehny ki riwayat kam hoti ja rahi hy, mager paband paira'ay meiN nazm kehny ka lutf aaj bhi wesa hi hy jesa Faiz, Saahir aur phir Mustafa Zaidi k daur meiN tha... bohat acha laga aap ki nazm paRh kr, nazm ka ikhtitaam khoob hy:

Khudaya tujh say bus ik AAKHRI SAWAL hai yeh
kuch ab sukoon kay lamhay bhi hum ko mil jaain
hamari bhi tu koyee aarzooain poori houn
hamaray dil mein bhi thoray gulab khil jaain

meri janib se boaht si daaad, is qadar achi nazm kehny pr wasool kreN...

wesy dusry band ka dusra shair paRh kr daf'atan mujhy Akhtar Usman sahab ka shair yaad aa gy, aap ki nazr ki'ay deta huN:

abhi to par bhi nahiN tolta uRaan ko maiN,
bila jawaz khaTakTa huN aasmaan ko maiN....

Allah Mola aap ko khush rakhy... youNhi khoob se khoob ter likhty aur ham se share krty raheN....
Mohtaram Faizan saheb,

Aap kay bharpoor aur tafseeli tabsiray ka buhat shukriya. Aap ka kehna sahi hai keh ab paband nazmain likhnay ka woh rujhan nahin raha laikin chahay paband shairey ho ya aazad shairey bus shairiat aur jamaliaat ka khayal rakhna chahiyay tab hi takhleeq mein asar hota hai.

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