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This is a discussion on Aai dard ki shiddat tu hi bata, us pyaar ka alam kia hoga within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Saraab jee, ab aap se kia kahen...jo bhi likhte hain kamaal likhte hain...is dafa bhi maza agaya parh kar...khaas kar ...
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#11
08-21-2007, 08:55 PM
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Saraab jee, ab aap se kia kahen...jo bhi likhte hain kamaal likhte hain...is dafa bhi maza agaya parh kar...khaas kar khayal ke achoote pan ka         |
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#12
08-22-2007, 08:25 AM
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Aap sab ka behad shukr guzaar hoon....Aur abhi apne saathiyon ki itni pyari contributions dekhi hain. Allah is mehfil ko abaad rakhe. Ameen. |
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#13
08-22-2007, 08:43 PM
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kaise hain aap... apne khiyaal ka izhaar karne se peshtar mein ne baqi dostoon ke khiyalaat bi parhe ... yeh deekh ke acha nahin laga ke yahan dostoon ki kissi ghalti ya khaami pe na to tooka jata hai aur na hi tashi ki jaati hai...zubaan ki tamaam khamiyoun awzaan ki aglaat aur diction ki khamiyoon pe bi daad di jaati hai .... yeh baat dil rakhne ko to theek hai lekon is tara to kabhi dostoon ki isslah nahin ho sake gi..... yahan is forum mein mehro... zain...atif aur doosre bahout se acha shohra aur shairaat mojoud hain un se guzarish hai ke apna yeh tarz e amal badal ke ache likhne waloon ko un ki khamiyoon se agah kareen ta ke un ki fikar ko balughat mil sake...... mein aap se bi guzarish karoonga ke in sathiyoon se mashwra mangeen jab hijr qayamat jaisa hai iqraar ka aalam kya ho ga......... jab aap ne pehle hijr bandha hai to iqraar ka hijr se kya tahaluq bana.... haan agar aap inkaar qayamat jaisa hai ikraar ka alam bandhte to sahi tha... ae dard ki shiddat tu hi bata us pyaar ka alam kya ho ga........yeh misra istehfamiya tha doosre misre mein jawaab aata to theek tha aap ke khiyaal ka husn apni jaga qayam hai lekon khiyaal ke izhaar ke liye jo misre likhe gaye un mein tasalsal aur rabt ki kammi hai... mere in ilfaaz se agar aap ke jazbaat ko thees poonche to muje muaf kijiye ga lekon muje yakeen hai jab aap khud ghoor kareen gay aur socheen gay to aane waale naye din aap ko meri baat achi lage gi.. aap ka mukhlis aur dua goo irshad qamar phd. urdu/arabic/persian amsterdam holland [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]
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#14
08-22-2007, 09:10 PM
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Irshaad Bhai, pehli baat to ye ke main already aap ka ardent fan hoon. Aur sach poochen to aap ki is guidance se mere dil main aap ki izzat bohot ziada barh gai hai. Aap ne ek senior hote hue itni tawajja se mera kalaam dekha aur mujhe meri khamion samait yunhi nahin chor dia bulke islaah bhi farmai. Main tah-e-dil se aap ka mushkoor hoon aur koshish karoonga ke aaenda is tarah ki ghaltion se bachoon. Aap ne Mehroo, Zain aur Atif ka naam bara sahi lia. Meri bhi khwahish hai ke ham log in se kuch seekh saken aur in teenon se bhi darkhwast hai ke tanqeed bara-e-islaah se ijtinaab na karen ke ye to dar haqeeqat tameeri kaam hai. |
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08-22-2007, 11:17 PM
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Jis shakhs ki aankhon ki wehshat, paththar ko hilae deti hai Us wehshi-e-gham ke khoon afshaan, ash'aar ka alam kia hoga salaam 1.gif ")1") bauhat hi umdah ghazal likhi hai aap nai aik aik lafz mein aap nai jazbaat bayaan kiyai hain khush rahiyai aur likhtai rahiyai
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#16
08-23-2007, 01:42 PM
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wah bohat hi zabar10 keep it up aap ki poetry par kar socha main kyun chup rahon lol.itz ma own poetry i hope aap logon ko pasand aaygi.. yeh fasalon ki saleeb giray tum aaoo kabhi to yaqeen milay meray dar-o-dewar ki khamoshiyany yeh intezar-o-ratjagay barishoon ki bond main aaso oon ki baar se mera ishq jo kab se qaad hai usay aahatoon ka gumaan jo ho meray khuaab ko rehai milay tum aaoo kabhi to yaqeen milay... |
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#17
08-23-2007, 06:33 PM
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Quote: ASLAAM O ALEKUM, ji Qamar bhahi,aap ne jo bhi kaha,aek aek lafz sach hai,aor mujhey us se qat.an koyi ikhtalaaf naheen,siwaaye aek baat ke,aor woh yeh ke aap ne mujhey bhi bahot oonchi jagah pe la bithaaya hai,jab ke haqeeqat bahot mukhtalif hai,(kiyoonke main to khud abhi seekhaney ke amal se guzar raha hoon). is ke baawajood ke main kuchh ziyaada naheen jaanta, yaqeenan aap ne dekha bhi ho ga ke ham apni si koshish kartey rehtey hain,matlab jo kuchh mujhey aata hai,saathiyon ko bata kar khushi mehsoos karta hoon,aor batata rehta hoon, lekin yahaan aek baat mazeed share karna chahoon ga ke mera maanana hai ke tanqeed (be shaq islaahi hi kiyoon na ho) ke saath saath hosla afzaayi ki bhi zaroorat rehti hai,warna naye likhney waalon ke liye safar khaasa dushwaar ho jaata hai,aor dekhaney main aaya hai ke kayi baar to woh himmat hi haar jaatey hain,(mumkin hai meri soch ghalat ho),so meri koshish rehti hai ke donon cheezon yehni islaah(mumkina had tak),aor hosla afzaayi,donon hi jaari rahain, umeed hai aap meri baat samajh rahey honge ke main kaya kehna chaah raha hoon, phir bhi INSHA ALLAH koshish rahey gi ke aap ke kahey huye pe behtar andaaz main amal peira ho sakoon, merey haq main bhi dua kijiye ga,bahot khush rahiye,
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#18
08-23-2007, 08:07 PM
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#19
08-23-2007, 10:04 PM
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 Qamar bhai aur aapne to mujhe bohat buland muqam par pohancha diya hai...magar bhai maiN to khud abhi tifl-e-maktab hooN... Qamar bhai aur ap jaisay sho'ra say seekhti hooN... agarchay mera ilm bohat naqas hai..magar phir bhi...bisaat bhar koshish karti rehti hooN k members ki hosla afzai k sath sath islah ka amal bhi jari rakha jaye...unhaiN na gawar na guzray..isliye is amal ki raftar agarchay khasi slow hai...magar silsila rukta nahiN.. Qamar bhai nay ghazal k baray maiN jo kaha, maiN bhi us say muttafiq hooN..magar ab unke bad kuch kehnay ki gunjaaish baqi nahiN rahi...so sarabs bhai...dil hargiz chota mat kijiye... ap waqqai bohat achay shayer haiN... behtari ki gunjaaish to behrhaal rehti hi hai...so mashq jari rakhye..inshAllah mazeed nikhar ata jayega.. khush rahiye
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