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Old 03-26-2008, 05:16 PM
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As-Salam-O-Alaikum,

I am 27 years old writing poetry for last 10 year, but could not get myself into the local community of poets. I think my poems and ghazals are mature enough.

Thanks to HG Urdu Poet Community to giving the poets like me a chance to publish our stuff.

Please read one of my poems above and rate it.

Much appreciated.

Waheed Akhtar Wahid
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Old 03-26-2008, 09:34 PM
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Sorry, Now image is fixed... Please rate it...
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As-Salam-O-Alaikum,

I am 27 years old writing poetry for last 10 year, but could not get myself into the local community of poets. I think my poems and ghazals are mature enough.

Thanks to HG Urdu Poet Community to giving the poets like me a chance to publish our stuff.

Please read one of my poems above and rate it.

Much appreciated.

Waheed Akhtar Wahid

wa-alaikum-as-salam Waheed Akhter Sahab

aap ko hallagulla aur Urdu Poets Club meiN khush-aamadeed. umeed hy k aap ka waqt yahaN acha guzry ga.

aap k bary meiN jan kr acha laga, waqaei aap ki shairi mature hy... hmaiN aap k mazeed kalam ka intzaar rahy ga. likhty raheN aur ham se share krty raheN, khush raheN aabad raheN...



mujhy aap ka nam paRh kr apny Pindi BhattiaN k senior sha'ir Professor Sheikh Waheed sahab yad aa ga'ye... bohat acha likhty haiN... in k do sher aap ki nazr krta huN:

berf baari se mery aasab ko neind aa gaei,
neind meiN kya khawb dkeha, khawb ko neind aa gaei

kis ne phaika tha ye paThar chahatoN ki oot se,
aik pal jaga tha phir talaab ko neind aa gaei...
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saat suroN ki mala japna, aisa aasaN kam nahiN

bohat khoob kalam pesh kiya hy aap ne, go k is trha ki lambi behroN ko qabu meiN rakhna mushkil hota hy, mager aap ne bohat achy andaz meiN khyalat ko lafzoN meiN dhala... meri janib se bohat si daaad is nazm ki nazr... aap ki mazeed kawishat ka intzar rahy ga.. likhty raheN aur ham se share krty raheN...
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wah bhi wah.............zaba rdast ghazal..........boha t se daad ke saath bohat khush rahian
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Old 03-27-2008, 04:41 AM
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As-Salam-O-Alaikum,

Pasandeedgi ka shukariy. I'll keep posting more KALAM as soon as possible.

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As-Salam-O-Alaikum,

Pasandeedgi ka shukariy. I'll keep posting more KALAM as soon as possible.

Best Regards,
Waheed Akhtar

hmaiN intzar rahy ga aap k kalam ka... aur hmaiN khushi ho gi ager aap is mehfil k deegar members ki takhleeqat pr apni ra'ay ka izhar kreN gy, aur na'ay likhny waloN ko apny mufeed mashwaroN se nawazeN gy...

keep posting, wish u best of luck....
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wa-alaikum-as-salam Waheed Akhter Sahab

aap ko hallagulla aur Urdu Poets Club meiN khush-aamadeed. umeed hy k aap ka waqt yahaN acha guzry ga.

aap k bary meiN jan kr acha laga, waqaei aap ki shairi mature hy... hmaiN aap k mazeed kalam ka intzaar rahy ga. likhty raheN aur ham se share krty raheN, khush raheN aabad raheN...



mujhy aap ka nam paRh kr apny Pindi BhattiaN k senior sha'ir Professor Sheikh Waheed sahab yad aa ga'ye... bohat acha likhty haiN... in k do sher aap ki nazr krta huN:

berf baari se mery aasab ko neind aa gaei,
neind meiN kya khawb dkeha, khawb ko neind aa gaei

kis ne phaika tha ye paThar chahatoN ki oot se,
aik pal jaga tha phir talaab ko neind aa gaei...

Wah bohat khoob kaha hai Professor Sahib nain.
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Old 03-27-2008, 07:48 PM
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I'll post new poems/ghazals sooner...
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