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Originally Posted by Raji Aatif Jee Aadaab,
Aap kee nazam saadha lekin waqai mein bauth khoobsoorat hai.
Daad qubool keejiye.
Nazm peRte howe uss ke pehle tukre ko zara yoon daikNe se mujhe aur behtar laga hai aap bhi daikh leejiye shayeed ke yeh tarteeb aap ke liye qabil-e-qubool ho. VerNa darguzar ker deejiye.
Majmoohi taur per aap ka takhaul aur bayaan qabil-e-tehseen hai.
Khair Andesh
Zahida Raees :Raji:
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Mujhay iss zindagani se koi bhi shikwa nahin laikin,
Najanay kyun mairay dil main
Zara c bai-sakooni hai,Zara c be-kali see hai
bohat c khaas baatain hain,jo mujh ko aam lagti hain
Mairay dil main unahin sun ker koi toofan nahin uthta
Tairi aankhain taira chehra,tairi awaz kee rimjhim
mujhay sub khawab lagti haiN
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Salam Zahida jee!
I feel really honord to read ur reply. Thanx for the reply, sugesstion and appreciation of my words. Aap kee sugesstion mujhay achi lagi hai. Mager Pehlay misray main "bhi" izafai hai. Baqi tarteeb ne nazm ko mazeed khobsoorat ker diya hai.
Thanx for the sugesstion.
Aatif