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Originally Posted by naheedv Inam ji,
azad nazm kee bhee behr hoti hai, aur voh kisi aik khaas meter/behr meiN reh kar kahi jaati hai.
haaN agar nazm kisee meter/behr meiN na ho tau phir voh nasree nazm ho gee, aazaad nazm na ho gee.
ab agar aap ye kaheN ke in donoN meiN farq kyaa hai tau ye maiN pehle hi arz kar chuki hooN.
shukriya
Naheed |
Ye baat kuch samag nahein aae. Azad nazm to kehtey hi is leye hein k is mein behr radeef qafeye ki bandish nahein hoti. logon ney aik behr mein aor behr say hat ker bhe nazmein likhi hein. misal mein aap Rashid aor Faiz ko ley sakti hein. Jab k nasri nazm mein alfaz ki tarteeb nasar sey mushaba hoti hey, yani is mein muravaga nazm ka aahang aor mosiqeyat nahein hoti, merey kheyal mein nasri nazm aor azad nazm mein yahe buneyadi farq hota hey.
aadab