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Originally Posted by BigDaddyCool Barbadiyoo.n main apni bas dosh hay humara
"Tohmat nahi kisi per, shikwa nahi kisi sey"
humain ye sher pasand aaya, baqi ghazal main "karay hoon", aur "junoon gari" per dil nahin thuka.
and i believe its "chub" not "jhub" . Correct me if i m wrong.
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AOA Aamir, jee sab sey pehly tu shukriya
aur jaisa k main pehly bhi likh chuki hon k lafz"jhab" mujh sey jaane unjaane main likha gaya tha jis liye mazrat khwa hoon, aur app tammam ahbab ki shukkar guzaar bhi jinhoo nay islah farmaai.
karey hoon aur junoo gari ki babat bhi bari tafseel sey jawabaat deye hain baaqi app meri islah shuda ghazal main dekh lejeye
aik baar phir shukriya
isi tarha tanqeed o tareef ka silsila jaari rakkheye kyu k hum nay likhne wale isi tarha aik dosre sey kutch sekh saktey hain
khush raheye hamesha