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Old 06-30-2008, 08:29 AM
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Default Re: ra'ay shumari - muqabla-e-Nazm goi June 08

HG ke Dosto, Assalam-o-Alaikum.

Muqabla-e-nazm goyee ki marking darj-e-zail hai.

1. Ridz

Andaz-e-beyan (5 marks) (rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul): 1
manzer se insaf (5 marks): 1

Total: 2

2. Chaltamusafir

Andaz-e-beyan (5 marks) (rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul): 1.5
manzer se insaf (5 marks): 1.5

Total: 3

3. Autam

Andaz-e-beyan (5 marks) (rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul): 1
manzer se insaf (5 marks): 1

Total: 2

4. Faridnawaz (MashaAllah, nazm ka akhri hissa bohot khubsoorat likha hai aap ne)

Andaz-e-beyan (5 marks) (rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul): 2.5
manzer se insaf (5 marks): 2.5

Total: 5

5. Danmurfi (Wah janab.....bohot khoob...maza agaya nazm parh kar...dheron daad)

Andaz-e-beyan (5 marks) (rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul): 4.5
manzer se insaf (5 marks): 4.5

Total: 9
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