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 | sad~sad | | | Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Islamabad
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Re: My peoms....plz ppl come and read them | | Quote:
Originally Posted by Meri Koushi Hai Kya Salam to all,  here are some of my favourite ones...of my own..tell me the feedback..thanks to all. Zindagi kisi ki Amanat nahi hoti,
Amanat me kabhi khayanat nahi hoti,
Dil ko sambhal ke rakhna DOST.....
Ishq ki jail me kabhi zamant nahi hoti!
My favourite one: Sab se chupa ker dard jo wo muskara dia,
Uski hansi ne tu aaj mujh ko rula dia.
Lehjay se uth rahi thi har ik dard ki dastan
Chehra bata raha tha sub kuch ganwa dia,
Awaz mein thehrao tha ankhon mein nami thi
Aur keh raha tha k mein ne sab kuch bhula diya,
Janay kia usko mukh se thein shikayatein
Tanhaiyon k dais mein khud ko basa dia,
Khud bhi woh hum say bichar k adhora sa ho gaya
Muj ko bhi itnay logoon mein tanha bana dia..... |
wa-alaikum-as-salam and welcome to HG & Urdu Poets Club
zamanat waly sher khoob kahy aap ne.
mager plz confirm kr deN k kya ye aap k apny sheir haiN, because 2nd ghazal to bohat mash'hoor-o-maqbool hy. aur ham bohat arse se sun aur paRh rahy haiN...
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