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Old 05-11-2008, 01:25 PM
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Default Re: Muqabla-e-Tarahi ghazal.. May-08

bohat achi baat ki aap nain azam sb. Agar JazziB ya Malkoo ko ghazal liktay wqat zahan main rakha jaye ga to ghazal ka PHALOODA ban jaye ga aur likki gayee ghazaal kuch aissi ho ge

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eee, cheeen, paaaan, thusss, aaaj kis ka intzaar hai


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