Waheed Sahb
tanqeed bardasht karna balke tanqeed ki dawat dena ..... wah..... baray haoslay aor mardangi ki baat hay... is bat par dher sari daad wusool kijiay....
aap ki nazm meri samajh mein nahin aai is mein sara sar meri kam fehmi ka qusoor hay...

albatta ghazal par baat ki ja sakti hay....

pehla shear
ham ahl-e-junoon ko masti ka jab jaam pilaya jaey ga...
lekan kia mast hona junoon kay baad ki koi manzil hay....?

doosra shear
"waqt pe sakta" waqt pe sakta nahin hota waqt rukta nahin hay
"har lash girai jaey gi" zara sa ghaor kijiay ga..... lash ko matlab pehlay say qatl shuda lash ko youn ba aihtmam giranay ki zaroorat nahin hoti... boht si lasahin girai jain gi... ya boht say logon ki lasain girai jain gi.... har lash ka matlab hay ke jitni bhi lashain hain sab girai jain gi....

teesra shear
shaoq-e-wafa main bhool gaey..... matlab wafa mein itnay magan huay ke yeh bhool gaey... to jo pehlay hi wafa mein itna shraboor hay woh deed kay maron ko pehloo say door kioon rakhay ga.... waisay aik baat aor hay ke deed kay maron ko pehloon mein bethnay say itna faida nahin hota jitna ru-broo bethnay say hota hay...

Chhatta shear
dekhiay agar sang trash waqaee sang shnas bhi hay to yeh us ki azafi khoobi hay isay tanqeed ka nishana nahin bnana chahiay... yeh to boht achi baat hay ke aik shakhs jis ka naam azar hay woh sang trash hay aor saath saath sang shnas bhi hay usay pata ke kis qabeel kay buton keliay konsa pathar munasab rahay ga to yeh us ki fankarana slahiyyat hay.... bahar haal doosra misra ..... ohho yeh kia aap nay to qafia hi badal dia lihaza yeh shear is ghazal ka nahin raha...

aakhri shear
acha hay
agar doosra misra youn karlia jaey ke hamain dekh kay tum say chehray par parda na giraya jaey ga.....
kioon k chehray say parda girana aor chehray par parda girana mukhtalif soortain hain...

bahar haal bura mat maniay ga.... aap ko haq hasil hay ke meri ghazlon par bhi tanqeed kijiay ta ke bahmi naqd-o-nazar say sab mustafeez hon...

aap ka bilkul apna
azam

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