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Default Re: Ghazal By Hasan Bhati

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Originally Posted by pnazO72 View Post
Ghazal By Hasan Bhati

Rahzan Ki Tang Damani Nazar Aane Ke Baad
Apni Daulat Ka Hua Andaza Lut Jaane K Baad

Mere Dukh Se Dab Gai Uski Bhi Koi Dukhti Rug
Der Tak Rota Raha Wo Mujh Ko Sam Jhane K Baad

Dil Kahin Hai Jan Kahin Hai Aur Kahin Hosho Khirad
Baith Kar Khud Ko Sametonga Tere Jaane K Baad

In Me Kho Kar Tujh Se Mai Ghafil Na Ho Jaon Kahin
Tod Dena Sab Khilaone Mujhko Bahlane K Baad

Sabt Karli Sab Ne Honto Par Qadam Bosi Ki Mohr
Kaun Zikre Ishq Karta Tere Deewane K Baad
As-salam-o-alaikum Hasan Sahab...

bohat umda ghazal kahi hy aap ne, ye aap ki Poets Club meiN pehli ghazal hy so apko is mehfil meiN khush-amadeed kehty haiN, umeed hy aap ka waqt yahaN acha guzry ga.

sath hi sath ye bhi pochna chahuN ga k kya ye aap ka zati kalaam hy??? bura mat maniay ga, aisa is liay pochna paRa k aap ki profile meiN Gender: female show ho rahi hy, to qayas ye guzerta hy k aap ne apni pasand k kisi shair k kalaam se intkhab share kiya hy...

keep posting... wish u best of luck...
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