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Originally Posted by Saadiq  Salaam !
I joined the forum long time ago but could'nt post much.
Hereby I am gonna post one of my fresh ghazal... I hope to get some response from all the friends of this forum.
1... Gila tab ho, jab main sahooN nahin
.... Tojhay kya gila, jo kahooN nahin
2... Khood hee bakhsh dee, haq-e-maasiyat
.... Ab ye hokm, hadd say baRhooN nahin
3... Teray hijr main chalooN dasht bhar
.... Kabhee apnay g'har main, p'hirooN nahin
4...Mazaa aa rahaa hai jo dard ka
.... To ye kaisay ho k haNsooN nahin
5... Teri yaad dill say widaa karoon
.... HaaN agar k jab main rahooN nahin
6... Tojhay shokr hai, samajh aa gayi
.... Na ho ishq, p'hir bhee sokooN nahin
7... Bhalaa kaisay niklay bhaRaas bhee
.... Aur main gheebatain bhee karooN nahin
8... Jo hareef maira naheef ho
.... Mojhay izn hai k laRooN nahin
9... Main nay khooN say lik'hee hai ye ghazal
.... Wo ye chaahtaa hai paRhooN nahin
waiting for the comments from all the friends of this forum.
Apni duaaon main yaad rak'hiye ga.
Allah Haafiz
Saadiq |
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aap ko aik taweel arsy baad yahaN dekha! so HG ki janib se aap ko is mehfil meiN wapsi pr aik bar phir khush-aamadeed... umeed hy k hmaiN yahaN aik dusry se kafi kuch seekhny ko mily ga.
ab aaty haiN aap ki ghazal ki taraf, jnab kya khoob matla hy bohat khoob... aur kya umda sheir hy... hansuN nahiN.... baei bohat mukhtalif zaviy se dekha hy, bohat khob, aur 6th sheir to ji kamaal hy, bohat si daad is sheir k liay, wahhh... baei maqta bhi khoob hi kaha hy, zabardast.... meri janib se bohat si daad is achi ghazal ki nazr, qubool kreN,
sirf dusra aur satweN sheir k dusry misroN k aaghaz meiN aik aadh rukan wazn se kam ho raha hy... aik bar nazr-e-sani kr lijiay ga.
aap ki is umda ghazal ko paRh kr aap ki baqi shairi paRhny ka bhi ishtiaq ho gya hy, so umeed hy aap apna kalam share krty raheN gy, Allah Taala aap ko aur ziada nawazy, khush raheN aabad raheN...
duago
faizan
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aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya...
(Bedil Haidri)
Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 05-10-2008 at 11:52 AM.
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