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Old 05-10-2008, 11:16 AM
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Salaam !
I joined the forum long time ago but could'nt post much.
Hereby I am gonna post one of my fresh ghazal... I hope to get some response from all the friends of this forum.


1... Gila tab ho, jab main sahooN nahin
.... Tojhay kya gila, jo kahooN nahin

2... Khood hee bakhsh dee, haq-e-maasiyat
.... Ab ye hokm, hadd say baRhooN nahin

3... Teray hijr main chalooN dasht bhar
.... Kabhee apnay g'har main, p'hirooN nahin

4...Mazaa aa rahaa hai jo dard ka
.... To ye kaisay ho k haNsooN nahin

5... Teri yaad dill say widaa karoon
.... HaaN agar k jab main rahooN nahin

6... Tojhay shokr hai, samajh aa gayi
.... Na ho ishq, p'hir bhee sokooN nahin

7... Bhalaa kaisay niklay bhaRaas bhee
.... Aur main gheebatain bhee karooN nahin

8... Jo hareef maira naheef ho
.... Mojhay izn hai k laRooN nahin

9... Main nay khooN say lik'hee hai ye ghazal
.... Wo ye chaahtaa hai paRhooN nahin



waiting for the comments from all the friends of this forum.
Apni duaaon main yaad rak'hiye ga.
Allah Haafiz

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