dukh k kitnay darya jo
zindagi k kaghaz par
titliyoN k rangoN ko
is tarah miTatay haiN
khamshi sulagti hai
dard gungunatay haiN
aansuoN ki barish maiN
khaab bheeg jatay haiN

Wah....Mujhe danmurfi se mukammal ittefaq hai.....Waqai in lines ka jawab nahin....bohot hi umda likha hai....baqi nazm main kuch technical issues hain jo Mehroo Sahiba ne highlight kiye hain.....unhen please dekh lijye ga

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Adaab teri bazm ke jeenay nahiN daitay
DeewanoN ko jeenay ki tamanna to baRi hay
(Qabil Ajmeri)