Thread: Muqabla-e-Tarahi ghazal.. May-08
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Old 05-08-2008, 01:28 PM
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Default Re: Muqabla-e-Tarahi ghazal.. May-08
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Originally Posted by waheedakhtar View Post
As-Salam-Alaikum,

Bohat shukria tafseel ka. Main is ko kissi aur bahar per daikh raha tha.

Meri aik suggestion hai, ainda kissisi tarah-misra kay saath agar us ki bahar bhe day diya karain to khoob ho ga kyoon keh yeh laazmi nahin keh har shair tmaam behron say ashna how.

Khair Andesh,
Waheed Akhtar Wahid
chaleN ye to acha hua k mera reply krna be-sood sabit nahiN hua...

aap ne durust kaha k her sha'ir tamaam behroN se waqif nahiN hota, hamari koshish bhi yahi hoti hy k her bar muqabla-e-terhi ghazal meiN behr ko wazeh tor pr likh deN, wesy abhi bhi ziada waqt nahiN guzra, maiN is behr k arakeen ko wahaN add kr deta hun...
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