As-Salam-Alaikum,

Bohat shukria tafseel ka. Main is ko kissi aur bahar per daikh raha tha.

Meri aik suggestion hai, ainda kissisi tarah-misra kay saath agar us ki bahar bhe day diya karain to khoob ho ga kyoon keh yeh laazmi nahin keh har shair tmaam behron say ashna how.

Khair Andesh,
Waheed Akhtar Wahid