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Old 05-02-2008, 02:06 PM
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Default Re: lafz meri sansoon main kiun ulajhty jaty hain
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bohat khob Aisha Sahiba, khoob nazm kahi hy aap ne.... Mehroo Sahiba ki corrections k bad nazm ka husn aur baRh gya hy... aik suggestion hy k aap apni likhi hui nazm aur mehroo sahiba ki corrections ko line wise compare kreN aur dekheN k kis trha lines flow meiN ati haiN to aap ko aaeinda behter andaz se likhny meiN madad mily gi...

meri janib se daad qubool kreN likhti raheN aur ham se share krti raheN, khush raheN aabad raheN....
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