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Old 04-29-2008, 09:11 PM
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Default Re: Raye shumari baraye muqabla-e-nazm goi.. April-08

HG Ke Dosto, Assalam-o-Alaikum.

Muqabla-e-nazm goyee ki marking hazir-e-khidmat hai. Marking criteria wahi hai jo ooper bayaan kia gaya hai.

1. Autam: 1.5 + 1.5 = 3

2. Pisces: 3.5 + 3.5 = 7 (MashaAllah, pehle ke muqable maiN bohot imrovement nazar a rahi hai)

3. Denarouse: 1.5 + 2.5 = 4

4. Naraz: 1.5 + 1.5 = 3

5. Faridnawaz: 1.5 + 3 = 4.5

6. Fazal Khan: 3 + 3 = 6

7. Cuteangel: 1.5 + 2.5 = 4

8. Shaz Malik: 2 + 2.5 = 4.5

9. Shikwa: 4.5 + 4 = 8.5 (Bhai mashaAllah, kia khubsoorat nazm kahi hai, ji khush hogaya paRh kar)

10. Anju: 1.5 + 1.5 = 3

11. Mom0: 2 + 3 = 5

12. Papa Ki Shehzadi: 1.5 + 2.5 = 4

13. Sohail2008: 1.5 + 1.5 = 3

14. Chalatmusafir: 1.5 + 1.5 = 3

15. Danmurfi: 4 + 5 = 9 (SubhanAllah janab, kia kehne haiN, behtreen nazm likhi hai, mubarakbaad paish hai)

16. Furqan: 1.5 + 1.5 = 3

17. Haya n: 3.5 + 4.5 = 8 (Wah...hamesha ki tarah bohot khubsoorat nazm likhi aap ne)

18. Sidra Baig: 1.5 + 2 = 3.5
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