bohat umda kawish hai Haya... aur yeh shikayat k tumne pehli martaba kiyoN likhi tarahi ghazal?.. itni khubsoorat shayera ko to har mah hisa laina chahiye..
zameen khasi mushkili thi... isiliye kuch ash'ar m'ani-o-mazmoon k hisab say kamzor rahay... baqi ghazal bohat achi rahi..
jo khab hum ko thay piyaray...
wahhhh...
bohat khush raho