Originally Posted by kanch ki mehroo

walikum asalam..

bhaee wahhhhhh.. nazm ka khayal to bohat hi khubsoorat hai.. andaz bhi bohat umda...

chalo sooraj ko dykhoo tum
batao kitni kirnain hain
batao kitna rooshan hy
batao kitni hiddat hy

wahhhh.. dilkash.. do lines maiN rawani ki kami mehsoos hui mujhe, unhaiN phir say daikh lijiye;

suno ik bat ooo pagul larky
kaheen pa rehm karthee hain, kaheen berehm ho jati hain

baqi sab bohat khoob..

khush rahiye