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Old 03-26-2008, 10:46 PM
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Default Re: Arifana

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Originally Posted by waheedakhtar View Post
As-Salam-O-Alaikum,

I am 27 years old writing poetry for last 10 year, but could not get myself into the local community of poets. I think my poems and ghazals are mature enough.

Thanks to HG Urdu Poet Community to giving the poets like me a chance to publish our stuff.

Please read one of my poems above and rate it.

Much appreciated.

Waheed Akhtar Wahid

wa-alaikum-as-salam Waheed Akhter Sahab

aap ko hallagulla aur Urdu Poets Club meiN khush-aamadeed. umeed hy k aap ka waqt yahaN acha guzry ga.

aap k bary meiN jan kr acha laga, waqaei aap ki shairi mature hy... hmaiN aap k mazeed kalam ka intzaar rahy ga. likhty raheN aur ham se share krty raheN, khush raheN aabad raheN...



mujhy aap ka nam paRh kr apny Pindi BhattiaN k senior sha'ir Professor Sheikh Waheed sahab yad aa ga'ye... bohat acha likhty haiN... in k do sher aap ki nazr krta huN:

berf baari se mery aasab ko neind aa gaei,
neind meiN kya khawb dkeha, khawb ko neind aa gaei

kis ne phaika tha ye paThar chahatoN ki oot se,
aik pal jaga tha phir talaab ko neind aa gaei...
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