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Default Raye shumari baraye muqabla-e-ghazal goi.. March-08



is maah muqabla-e-tarahi ghazal k liye Poets Club ki khubsoorat shayera Kanawl Hussain ka jo misra dia gaya, woh tha;

humaray bakht k taray zameeN pe aa k rahay..

humaray mu'aziz sh'ora ne apni khubsoorat kawishat k sath muqablay maiN shirkat ki...hum un tamam sathiyoN k shukr guzar haiN..

muqablay k nataaij ka ailaan inshAllah 1st April. ko hoga...faisla judges k marks ki bunyad par kia jayega.. judges say guzarish hai k woh 31st march tak humaiN apni qeemti raye say aagah kar daiN.. humaray mu'aziz judges k naam yeh haiN;

Sohail Malik, Anis Hasan, Aatif Saeed, Zehrab, Mehtab, saahir, Kanch ki Mehroo & WanderingThoughts

Saraabs sahab ne chuNkay is bar conetst meiN hisa liya hy so inheN is bar judges panel meiN shamil nahiN kiya ja raaha...

Evalutaion ka criteria yeh hai:

Behr aur Wazn = 4
andaaz-e-bayaN, Rawani, Takayyul, alfaaz ka ist'emal = 6
total marks = 10


muqablay maiN shamil ghazliyat yeh haiN;

1: Mukhshif



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2: mobi91

humaray bakht ke taaray zameeN pe aa kay rahe
sabhi inaam tumhaaray zameeN pe aa kay rahe

humeiN jo log thay pyare falak pe jaatay rahe
tujhe jo log thay pyare zameeN pe aa kay rahe

kahiN jo zulf ghani ho kabhi jo chehra diya
laga ke tere ishaare zameeN pe aa kay rahe

koi khata hui humse ke ik zamana hua
tabhise humse bechaaray zameeN pe aa kay rahe

qashish hai is mein koi, seher tak jo jaaga raha
dikha,farishtay yeh saaray zameeN pe aa kay rahe

farhaad-o-qais thay, ik waqt meer aur ghalib
tamaam ishq ke maare zameeN pe aa kay rahe?

falak ka shola hai har roz jalta hai, maana
faqat ik roz guzaray, zameeN pe aa kay rahe

nazar mein aaya hai jabse woh phool, andaleeb kay
sukhan mein naqsh utaaray zameeN pe aa kay rahe

mudabbar, suna hai kal ke meri jaan ka dushman,
main jaauN uske bhi waare, zameeN pe aa kay rahe

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3: Saraabs

کسے نصیب کہ دنیا میں مسکرا کے رہے
یہ وہ مقام ہے جو خوں رلا رلا کے رہے

بڑا تھا ناز ہمیں اپنے ضبط پر لیکن
جہاں کے ظلم تو اس کو بھی آزما کے رہے

ہمیں سکون تھا برباد ہو کے رہنے میں
سو اپنے ہاتھ سے ہم آشیاں جلا کے رہے

سنا تھا عشق کی تا ثیر تو مسلم ہے
سو ہم بھی راہ میں پلکیں سدا بچھا کے رہے

بس ایک بار اٹھایٔ نظر تو تھی یہ سزا
تمام عمر نگاہوں کو پھر جھکا کے رہے

انا کی ہار ہویٔ اور قسم بھی ٹوٹ گیٔ
ہوا نہ کیا کیا، مگر اس کے پاس جا کے رہے

عطاۓ ظلم اداۓ جنوں کو راس آ یٔ
وہ سنگ اٹھا کے رہے، ہم بھی زخم کھا کے رہے

تمام عمر جفاؤں کا سامنا ہو گا
سراب! آپ جو خوگر یونہی وفا کے رہے

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4: Farid Nawaz

Ashkoon ke gohar ankh se barsaa ke rahee

aaee dard-e-hijar dekh kiya lutaa ke rahee

ye jantee huwee bhi ke tu ba wafaa nahi

aaee omer tera sath mager nibha ke rahee

bujha ke zehir meen ju hadson ne rakhe the

wo teer hans ke kalejee pe hum kha ke rahee

raza-e-dost ka jab se samajh liya mafhoom

hayat o moot ke israr logoo pa ke rahee

paraa ju waqat tu yaron ne pheer li ankheen

paraee apnee sabhi hum azmaa ke rahee

meen ne kaghaz pe kyee naqsh banee lakin

teri surat ko takhul meen chupaa ke rahee

kahen daghon ka tabasum,kaheen zakhmon ki bahar

hamaree bakhat ke taree zameen pe aa ke rahee

pasand ayaa he iss tarah dushmanoo ka khaloos

nawaz dost bhi dushman abb bana ke rahee

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5: smily anju



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6: Haya n




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7: bazeecha-e-gham

zinda rahay wohi log jo pyar paa k rahay
kia paya ger ishq main na sub luta k rahay

irada tha k dil main kuch na sajayen gay hum
lekin woh derd se dil mera sajaa k rahay

gerdish-e-ayam ko laakh rokna chaha hum ne
lekin wasl k baad hijr k din aa k rahay

gulshan se soo-e-dasht hum nikal paray
phir gulshan k rahay na dasht-o-sehra k rahay

dil-e-veeran main veerani akhir kab tak
koi to is dil main gher bana k rahay

ab tak kaisay guzri yeh mat pooch Majid
dil humain , hum dil ko behlaa k rahay

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8: farhan85


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9: Amirmuaan

nigah-e-naaz se apna mujhay bana k rahay
khayal-o-khwb main sapna naya saja k rahay

main naaz kerta to kaisay teri mohabbat per
k mairay hath main sikkay sada jafa k rahay

nahin hai fasl-e-gul-e-lala pe kuch bhi moqoof
bus aik shoula ye sari fasal jala k rahay

wajood tera behalta na tha khilon se
banay khilona sajan tujh ko phir hunsa k rahay

nigah-e-naaz se daikha tha is terha tou ne
ye zeest apni teray naam pe lutta k rahay

ye dunya piyar ki dushman hai piyar lout-ti hai
so teray sath naya ik nagar basa k rahay

humain kamal koi kis terha se mill pata
humaray bakht k taray zameen pe aa k rahay

banay ho yaas ki tasveer kis liye aakhir
muaan tum to zamanay main sir utha k rahay

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Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 03-28-2008 at 01:07 PM.