Ws .....
Khayal-e-nazm buhut acha laga angel jii ....
aap agar issay Inpage mein likh ker share kertii'n to zyada acha hota, kyunke phir parhne wale kii rawanii bar'qarar rehtii hai ... Roman mein kaii dafa aisa hota hai k lafz samajtay samajtay rawanii toot jatii hai ... aor agar nazm thorii lenghty ho to nazm parhne ka mazaah nahii aata ....

kher ... issay main ghaltii nahii keh sakta, ghaltiyaan to baray shu'ara hii nikaalein gey ....bahar'haal mujhe aap ki nazm buhut achii lagii ....

Likhtay rahiye ..
Hasde Wasde Rawo ...

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Unhein Main Farz Kerta Hoon
Chalo Main Farz Kerta Hoon
Mujhe Tum se Mohabbat Hai ... !