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Old 03-03-2008, 11:48 PM
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Default Re: Muqabla-e-ghazal goi.. (March-08)

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Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts View Post
wa-alaikum-as-salam jnab,

ye jan kr bohat khushi ho rhi hy k aap bhi shairi ka shoq rakhty haiN, hmaiN ap k kalam ka intzaar rahy ga.

ager aap samajhty haiN k aap ki ghazal meiN major ghalati k chances haiN to aap is tutorial (~*~Poetry Tutorials...~*~) meiN se ghazal k basic components k bary meiN detail jan len, aur koshish kreN k khud se hi aisi mutawaqy ghalati ko dur kr deN... is contest ka asl maqsad bhi members meiN acha likhny ka jazba baidar krna aur un ki islah krna hy, so ager aap apny tor pr ghazal final kr k judges k samny rakheN gy to judges ki ra'ye se aap ko apni ghalatioN ko thek krny ka moqa mily ga, jo k aaeina k liye kafi mufeed sabit hoga...
mere khayal se contest ke liye mai woh hi ghazal post karoon, ku ke apni samajh boojh ke mutabiq mai us mai kaafi correction ker chuka tha. or yeh waqayi ghalat ho jata agar mai us ki kisi se islah kerwa ke us ko share kerta.
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