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Originally Posted by Mukhshif  Asalam-o-Alaikum
ittefaq se jis din muqablay ki thread lagi, mera bhi yahan guzar ho gaya, socha ku na taba a'amayi kerli jaye, ussi waqt se kaghaz qalam pakra or khasi mehnat ke baad ghazal likhi, lekin mera rishta shayiri se taqreeban 8 saal baad dobara jura hai, na hi mai urdu shayiri ki basics janta hoon, tou kya muqablay mai shamil kerne se pehle mai ghazal yahan kisi ko dikha sakta hoon  kaheen aisa na ho baad mai major ghaltiyan nikal aayen.  |
wa-alaikum-as-salam jnab,
ye jan kr bohat khushi ho rhi hy k aap bhi shairi ka shoq rakhty haiN, hmaiN ap k kalam ka intzaar rahy ga.
ager aap samajhty haiN k aap ki ghazal meiN major ghalati k chances haiN to aap is tutorial
(~*~Poetry Tutorials...~*~) meiN se ghazal k basic components k bary meiN detail jan len, aur koshish kreN k khud se hi aisi mutawaqy ghalati ko dur kr deN... is contest ka asl maqsad bhi members meiN acha likhny ka jazba baidar krna aur un ki islah krna hy, so ager aap apny tor
pr ghazal final kr k judges k samny rakheN gy to judges ki ra'ye se aap ko apni ghalatioN ko thek krny ka moqa mily ga, jo k aaeina k liye kafi mufeed sabit hoga...