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Old 02-29-2008, 08:48 PM
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achi koshish hai, lekin jesa ke kanch ki mahroo sahiba ne kaha tou mai bhi yehi kahoon ga ke ghazal mai jo tasalsul hona chahiye, beech mai woh qayim nahi raha.
baharhaal thori si mazeed mehnat se aap ke qalam mai mazeed nikhaar aa sakta hai
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