 Re: Qalam ko aab-e-baqa day.. to koi shair kahooN..! | |
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Originally Posted by kanch ki mehroo   2 ash'ar paish-e-khidmat haiN... qalam ko aab-e-baqa day.. to koi shair kahooN
woh mujh ko dard naya day.. to koi shair kahooN
jo shehr bhar ka maseeha bana hua hai abhi..
woh mujh ko mujh say mila day.. to koi shair kahooN aapki aara ka intazar rahay ga.. khush rahiye Mehroo~ | assalam-o-alaikum kanch ki mehro sahiba aap k ashaar perhay--bohat zaberdast khayal hai aur tareef perh ker ashar aur bhi achay lagnay lagay. aik jissarat ker raha hon umeed hai k tanqeed kernay ki ijazat ho gi aur bura nahi mana jaye ga k itni sari tareef main aik tanqeed bhi shamil honi chahiye jo kaha gaya hai k "qalam ko aab-e-baqa dai to koi shaair kahon" mean k shair deemagh se nahi kaha ja raha qalam se kaha ja raha hai jab k qalam se sirf likha jata hai aur agar baqa ki zaroorat hai to alfaz ko hai na k qalam ko us aab ki zaroorat k jis se likh ker baqa hasil ho jaye kiun k agar alfaz ko baqa mill jaye to phir shair ki baqa aap ho jaye gi umeed hai mairi baat ka bura na manain gi kiun k ye mairi naqis rae hai aur HG k itnay baray baray poets ki tareef k baad mujh ko lagta hai k shaid waqai naqis hi hai humaisha khush rahain amir muaan
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