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 Re: Qalam ko aab-e-baqa day.. to koi shair kahooN..! | |
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Originally Posted by kanch ki mehroo  
2 ash'ar paish-e-khidmat haiN...
qalam ko aab-e-baqa day.. to koi shair kahooN
woh mujh ko dard naya day.. to koi shair kahooN
jo shehr bhar ka maseeha bana hua hai abhi..
woh mujh ko mujh say mila day.. to koi shair kahooN
aapki aara ka intazar rahay ga..
khush rahiye
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wa-alaikum-as-salam KKM
bohat si maazrat k reply meiN ta'kheir ho gaei, moaaf kiji'ye ga...
baei bohat umda sheir kahy haiN, dono sher hi apni jaga khoob haiN. lekin matla k pehly misry ne to kya hi lutf diya, lekin mujhy hayrat hy k itni zerkhaiz zameen hony k bawajood aap ne sirf 2 hi sheir kahy haiN, qafia bhi sada aur aasan hy, ap se derkhawst hy k isy jald az jald ghazal ki shakl deN, aur ham se share kreN...
khush rahen abad raheN, Allah taala aap ko is se bhi ziada ata kary....
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