bohat achi kawish hy Maria Sahiba!!! jesa k sab ne kaha thoughts bohat achy haiN , aur aisa lagta hy k nazm ka aakhri his'sa aik alag nazm hy, aur oper wala his'sa aik aur nazm... go k aap ne donoN his'sy apni apni jaga umda likhy haiN lekin donoN ko akaTha aik nazm ki surat meiN paRheN to wo baat nahiN rehti...

rawani khoob rahi, lekin lafz "Qehqa" nahiN hota , isy "Qeh-Qaha" paRhty haiN, aur likhty bhi isi wazn pr haiN.. jesa k aap ne aik misry meiN likha:

GHAROUN MAIN GONJTE QEHQE,MAOUN KI DUAOUN MAIN

misal k tor pr is misry ko ager aap aisy likheN to ye lafz apny sahi talafuz pr paRha ja'ye ga k:

gharoN meiN qeh-qahooN ki gonj meiN, maaN ki duaoN meiN....

likhti raheN aur ham se share krti raheN, Allah Taala aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN aabad rhaeN...

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