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Originally Posted by kanch ki mehroo
umda ghazal hai cute... aik bat ka khayal rakha kijiye.. k shair maiN tarz-e-takhatub same hona chahiye... bas is bat ko mad-e-nazar rakhtay huwe kuch tabdeeliyaN kar lijiye...
khush rahiye |
shukriya apka mehro lekin yeh tarz e takhatub kuch samajh nahi aya.koshish jari hai
apna khayal rakhyega